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Old 12-24-2003, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Miss Hotshit

Love stuck me like anvils fallin on cartoon characters
At sight & meeting i thought of marriage with her
Men strive for what they can’t have, always trying to grasp
what i can’t grab, tired of blaming my dad
Am i really that bad? that unattractive?
Is all this writing simply retroactive?
But the story at hand, is the hormonal rage of a young man,
that’s only temporarily stalled with my right hand.
Met my dreamgirl, everything was going as planned
But everyone’s eventually woken up from dreamland.
Her false romance, had me in emotional quicksand
and she just used me to hold up her ego like a kickstand.
But i tried to advance, tell her how much i loved her,
and through showing my feelings she said i smoothered her
and covered her like a warm comforter
But she was Miss Hotshit, and didn’t need my extra temperature....
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Old 12-27-2003, 05:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-28-2003, 03:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Deep, and I suspect a story behind it too!
 
Old 12-28-2003, 10:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Good work!
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Old 01-02-2004, 04:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
What's beyond psycho?
 
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Very nice.
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Old 01-09-2004, 08:44 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Miss Hotshit sucks ass I think I knew her once as well.
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Old 01-10-2004, 03:08 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I know, I met someone like that.. it sucks.

You'll be fine bro, just as I will
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Old 02-07-2004, 06:03 AM   #8 (permalink)
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This made me laugh with empathy. Thanks
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