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Dajamany 12-24-2003 08:27 PM

Miss Hotshit
 
Love stuck me like anvils fallin on cartoon characters
At sight & meeting i thought of marriage with her
Men strive for what they can’t have, always trying to grasp
what i can’t grab, tired of blaming my dad
Am i really that bad? that unattractive?
Is all this writing simply retroactive?
But the story at hand, is the hormonal rage of a young man,
that’s only temporarily stalled with my right hand.
Met my dreamgirl, everything was going as planned
But everyone’s eventually woken up from dreamland.
Her false romance, had me in emotional quicksand
and she just used me to hold up her ego like a kickstand.
But i tried to advance, tell her how much i loved her,
and through showing my feelings she said i smoothered her
and covered her like a warm comforter
But she was Miss Hotshit, and didn’t need my extra temperature....

sub zero 12-27-2003 05:28 PM

amen

12-28-2003 03:08 AM

Deep, and I suspect a story behind it too!

ForgottenKnight 12-28-2003 10:11 PM

Good work!

torgone 01-02-2004 04:04 PM

Very nice.

taylorspl 01-09-2004 08:44 PM

Miss Hotshit sucks ass I think I knew her once as well.

Zorvox 01-10-2004 03:08 AM

I know, I met someone like that.. it sucks.

You'll be fine bro, just as I will :)

J.R.V.A. 02-07-2004 06:03 AM

This made me laugh with empathy. Thanks


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