What Have I done? Part 1: Sacrifice
 

Part One:

Once Again, I find myself lost


Awhile ago, I was lost in the sea
The sea of mediocrity
As for where I am now....
I would now be content to be in that sea
Mediocrity is glorious
as to where I am now....


I now sit in a chasm of sorrow and pity
Alone and afraid
Like a frog in slowly boiling water
I knew not where I was headed
I sat, waiting to plunge to this low
Not trying to stop it, only continuing
for that which would never be
And now I sit here in my chasm
and wonder "was it worth it?"
of course it wasn't, you fool
but I should have known this the whole way
I should have stopped it
But I was unable to see the chasm coming
Too blinded by the beauty
To see the ugliness that would follow
Alone I sit


Sacrificed All
Gained Nothing
What have I done?




I hate how I can only write well when I'm depressed. I hate being sad :(

Check out my other threads for parts 2 and 3
Thoughts, opinions, criticisms?

thanks for sharing. heartache can be tough, but atleast with an outlet you can be creative in it -- and with a place like TFP you can share it with others. thank again. . .

Nice work.

I hate being sad too. :(

I know how you feel.

I can relate. It was a mistake I almost made a while ago.
*hugs*

I made a mistake. I'm not alone but I still feel the pain.

I know what you mean, my best stuff usally comes when I am sad. I like this, thanks