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Aphrodite · 12-02-2003, 03:03 PM

Nightscape

How quickly one forgets the stars
Passing years replace the innocence
Of lying, staring up at nothing
Weeping, only moon bears witness.
She cared not then and cares not now
Cold companion to my stillness
Barren heart, no longer loves
Nor does she, princess of ice.
Far am I from those days
When luxury I had for staring
At the stars, and caring not
I live or die, it mattered little.
Will I lay again on that same porch-step
Clad in sparkling frost
Wishing that the end come sooner
Fall asleep, under the moon.

Dixie · 12-02-2003, 04:06 PM

this is very pretty and very well-written. great writing style, as well. keep posting!

Aphrodite · 12-02-2003, 04:47 PM

Thanks, I will

Esen · 12-02-2003, 06:28 PM

welcome to the lit board!
Grest poem

Aphrodite · 12-02-2003, 06:44 PM

Thanks, and for the welcome

riptide4070 · 12-05-2003, 05:49 PM

that was very deep. bold words that speak from heart to heart!

Aphrodite · 12-06-2003, 02:29 AM

Thanks

12-02-2003, 03:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
Aphrodite Tilted Location: Lost in the pages of a book full of death	Nightscape Nightscape How quickly one forgets the stars Passing years replace the innocence Of lying, staring up at nothing Weeping, only moon bears witness. She cared not then and cares not now Cold companion to my stillness Barren heart, no longer loves Nor does she, princess of ice. Far am I from those days When luxury I had for staring At the stars, and caring not I live or die, it mattered little. Will I lay again on that same porch-step Clad in sparkling frost Wishing that the end come sooner Fall asleep, under the moon.

12-02-2003, 04:06 PM	#2 (permalink)
Dixie Psycho Location: the land of cotton	this is very pretty and very well-written. great writing style, as well. keep posting! __________________ talk is cheap, so i buy every word you said. scared me half to death, now i'm half dead.

12-02-2003, 06:28 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	welcome to the lit board! Grest poem __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

12-05-2003, 05:49 PM	#6 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	that was very deep. bold words that speak from heart to heart! __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

12-02-2003, 04:47 PM	#3 (permalink)
Aphrodite Tilted Location: Lost in the pages of a book full of death	Thanks, I will

12-02-2003, 06:44 PM	#5 (permalink)
Aphrodite Tilted Location: Lost in the pages of a book full of death	Thanks, and for the welcome

12-06-2003, 02:29 AM	#7 (permalink)
Aphrodite Tilted Location: Lost in the pages of a book full of death	Thanks