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Old 11-16-2003, 08:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First Post--"Blind and Bound"

A poem...thinking about making it into a song.


My hands are clean
But tied behind my back.
My eyes are wide open,
But covered with a cloth.
My heart is on my sleeve,
But I'm covering it with my coat.
I'll wait here, with clean, tied hands
And blindfolded eyes.
I cannot reach out to touch you
Nor warm you with my gaze,
So I hide my heart while you hide your soul.
I'll protect while you freeze,
I'll wait while you hide.
I'll wait as long as I can, blind and bound.
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Old 11-17-2003, 02:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it.. has a very expectant feel to it. Thank you
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Old 11-17-2003, 05:17 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice Sabrina, Sounds like it would make a great song.
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And as she plays,
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