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Passion
My loins burn
With your every caress upon my exposed flesh Sending me closer to the very edge I feared to stand next to Now I pray to fall Each breath I take brings me closer to you Your gentle penetration of my bounderies Brings us to such exilerating heights Our skin burns with each others gathering passion Consuming us in a whirlwind of emotions Bring us to new planes of awareness We are the only two in this world we have created Nothing matters more than this moment This one second in tme We are one, joined in this firery passion Flying higher than even the angels We dance in a mating ritual of the pagans Wild and free, no bonds can hold us No laws can tie us to the ground We are one with each other Climbing to a shuddering cracendo Collapsing into one another Spent in each others arms |
wow, that was an amazing poem. very touching. keep up the good work, you're a wonderful writer
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Even the horned god took a second look at that one...think I'll go wake up my wife lol
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You take things that are suppose to be beutiful and instead make them real. That is the true beauty of this poem.
This is an amazing poem. I wanted to read it again. |
Yes,I agree. You have a way with words. Thanks
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I love reading your work Fallen Angel!!!!! Never doubt your potential.
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*thumbs up*
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That's Fantastic! You're an amazing poet! I love reading your work!
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I concur, wonderful work.
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Outstanding poetry Angel... I would like to see more
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Thank you all so very much, you truely do not know how much this means to get praise such as this. I know I havent been around much but I just want to say that I value everyone of you and thank you from the bottom of my heart. This place has become my safety net, and I charish each one of you.
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