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fallen_angel 11-11-2003 12:31 PM

Passion
 
My loins burn
With your every caress upon my exposed flesh
Sending me closer to the very edge
I feared to stand next to
Now I pray to fall
Each breath I take brings me closer to you
Your gentle penetration of my bounderies
Brings us to such exilerating heights
Our skin burns with each others gathering passion
Consuming us in a whirlwind of emotions
Bring us to new planes of awareness
We are the only two in this world we have created
Nothing matters more than this moment
This one second in tme
We are one, joined in this firery passion
Flying higher than even the angels
We dance in a mating ritual of the pagans
Wild and free, no bonds can hold us
No laws can tie us to the ground
We are one with each other
Climbing to a shuddering cracendo
Collapsing into one another
Spent in each others arms

SSJwrestler 11-11-2003 03:18 PM

wow, that was an amazing poem. very touching. keep up the good work, you're a wonderful writer

tecoyah 11-11-2003 03:50 PM

Even the horned god took a second look at that one...think I'll go wake up my wife lol

Esen 11-11-2003 07:55 PM

You take things that are suppose to be beutiful and instead make them real. That is the true beauty of this poem.

This is an amazing poem.
I wanted to read it again.

J.R.V.A. 11-13-2003 03:06 PM

Yes,I agree. You have a way with words. Thanks

riptide4070 12-07-2003 07:27 PM

I love reading your work Fallen Angel!!!!! Never doubt your potential.

absence_of_color 12-08-2003 10:35 AM

*thumbs up*

ForgottenKnight 12-08-2003 05:38 PM

That's Fantastic! You're an amazing poet! I love reading your work!

taliendo 12-13-2003 12:46 AM

I concur, wonderful work.

lightning 12-16-2003 06:32 AM

Outstanding poetry Angel... I would like to see more

fallen_angel 01-14-2004 10:16 AM

Thank you all so very much, you truely do not know how much this means to get praise such as this. I know I havent been around much but I just want to say that I value everyone of you and thank you from the bottom of my heart. This place has become my safety net, and I charish each one of you.


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