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Jadey 11-06-2003 10:30 PM

In my head
 
Shhhhh.
Did you hear that?

I thought I heard an original thought.
Nah, couldn’t have been.

Look away
As your HBO Comedy Special humor’s crumpled and thrown into the corner like a pair of hooker’s torn silk panties.
Don’t dare question the imponderables!
Examine or judge the jury of false hope.
Turn a deaf ear to the beckoning muses
And plagiarize the assassination of identity.
The Killing of Character.
Amputate all individuality
as your attributes are agonizingly annihilated
your uniqueness is assimilated into the mass produced gel of silly putty conformity.

Dance the dance of the shallow and misguided
And revel in your unique uniformity.
Sway with the masses like one of a thousand reeds in the marsh lands.
And step forward to declare:
“I think I heard something too.”
“Did you all hear that?”

But no one else heard it.
It was all in my head.

Esen 11-07-2003 04:26 PM

lol, that was pretty kick ass.

SSJwrestler 11-07-2003 07:05 PM

liking the simile with the silk panties, very original

Eldaire 11-08-2003 01:50 AM

Very sattirical. I liked it, but now the question remains, what are you going to do?

J.R.V.A. 11-09-2003 07:17 AM

Thanks Jadey, I'm glad to see your stuff here again. Pretty cool. I like this poem,it is really good.

tecoyah 11-09-2003 09:50 AM

Damn good...wish I'd thought of it
but pondering such , I wonder
If thought of such I had
wouldnt need to wander thru the muck
dependent on luck to progress
debating within myself on origionality
mundane as my days become

ForgottenKnight 11-10-2003 01:39 AM

That's really good! I like it! It was all in your head, but now it's on paper for the world to read. So now that people see and enjoy it, it's in others heads as well.

Jadey 11-14-2003 01:32 AM

Thanks all for the kind words.

carebear 11-16-2003 10:32 PM

After reading it, I almost felt I should be a nonconformist and tell you it sucks, but...
It's really good.
Truth is truth.
Thank you for sharing.


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