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In my head
Shhhhh.
Did you hear that? I thought I heard an original thought. Nah, couldn’t have been. Look away As your HBO Comedy Special humor’s crumpled and thrown into the corner like a pair of hooker’s torn silk panties. Don’t dare question the imponderables! Examine or judge the jury of false hope. Turn a deaf ear to the beckoning muses And plagiarize the assassination of identity. The Killing of Character. Amputate all individuality as your attributes are agonizingly annihilated your uniqueness is assimilated into the mass produced gel of silly putty conformity. Dance the dance of the shallow and misguided And revel in your unique uniformity. Sway with the masses like one of a thousand reeds in the marsh lands. And step forward to declare: “I think I heard something too.” “Did you all hear that?” But no one else heard it. It was all in my head. |
lol, that was pretty kick ass.
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liking the simile with the silk panties, very original
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Very sattirical. I liked it, but now the question remains, what are you going to do?
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Thanks Jadey, I'm glad to see your stuff here again. Pretty cool. I like this poem,it is really good.
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Damn good...wish I'd thought of it
but pondering such , I wonder If thought of such I had wouldnt need to wander thru the muck dependent on luck to progress debating within myself on origionality mundane as my days become |
That's really good! I like it! It was all in your head, but now it's on paper for the world to read. So now that people see and enjoy it, it's in others heads as well.
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Thanks all for the kind words.
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After reading it, I almost felt I should be a nonconformist and tell you it sucks, but...
It's really good. Truth is truth. Thank you for sharing. |
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