Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community (https://thetfp.com/tfp/)
-   Tilted Literature (https://thetfp.com/tfp/tilted-literature/)
-   -   Waking (https://thetfp.com/tfp/tilted-literature/34566-waking.html)

fallen_angel 11-05-2003 11:24 AM

Waking
 
I imagine you are here
I feel your presence in every pore of my body
I feel you gently pressed against me
In a loving embrace
Your breath gently playing on my neck
Lips gently kissing my temple
Hands roaming at will
Over my body as you claim me
For you and only you

I awaken in the morning chill
The sky is overcast with low gray clouds
The only head on my pillow is mine
The sheets to my back are cold and uninviting
The curtains flutter as a cold breeze blows through the window
Awakening without you here
Is like dieing a little inside
I need your fire that awakens the flame
That burns inside me for you

Esen 11-05-2003 04:27 PM

Wow,
How you do it time after time is amazing.
I really really admire your writing style.

Everyone has something that they truly like. some kind of music they can relate to some kind of something that always touches them.
Your writing does this for me.
You write in a way that is so beautiful and so true to yourself it is amazing.
Sometimes I feel like you should be posting on the exhibition boards. You share so much of your talents.

This poem really took my breath away.
Thank you.

J.R.V.A. 11-06-2003 05:09 AM

Yes, I would like to see you too.....
Also I would like to be there....
Thanks

SSJwrestler 11-06-2003 08:41 PM

beautiful positively beautiful


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 01:37 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.6.0 PL2
© 2002-2012 Tilted Forum Project


1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54