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Old 11-05-2003, 08:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
Keep on rolling. It only hurts for a little while.
 
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Just some writing

I'm going to keep updating this thread with new material as it comes to me. Please feel free to add any comments or critiques.

Sliding

Sliding into the abyss
blackness surrounds
never to return

She looked at me with disgust in her eyes
could not believe the way things had changed
looking to grow
looking to love

Sliding into the abyss
blackness surrounds
never to return

I never meant to hurt her
I never meant to cause this pain
I was only looking for love
I was only looking to grow

Sliding into the abyss
blackness surrounds
never to return

She screamed
the knife flashed
never got to explain

Sliding into the abyss
blackness surrounds
never to return
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Old 11-05-2003, 05:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
Thats MR. Muffin Face now
 
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amazing. This has to be my favorite of your work..
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Old 11-06-2003, 05:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like this too. Thanks for sharing
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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Old 11-06-2003, 06:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the compliments. I'll keep posting more in this thread.
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Old 11-06-2003, 07:27 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Confusion

can't see in front of me
can't see behind me
clouded with confusion

which way is up
which way is down
i just want to find direction
i just want to find my way

can't see in front of me
can't see behind me
clouded with confusion

mystery surrounds me
the unknown haunts me
i'm searching
i'm discovering

can't see in front of me
can't see behind me
clouded with confusion

but the discovery is hollow
the search is never-ending
even when the unknown is known
mystery surrounds it

can't see in front of me
can't see behind me
clouded with confusion
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Old 11-06-2003, 07:46 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Good stuff, I really like this
"even when the unknown is known"
Thanks for sharing
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Old 11-06-2003, 08:34 PM   #7 (permalink)
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im liking it
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Old 11-10-2003, 07:31 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Honesty

Cruel and intolerable
just and true
Honesty
The fabric life is waved from
each thread adding to the strength
of the previous
Needed
never devious or fake
unflinching in truth
Honesty
For those that follow its path
rewards abound
friendships made
relationships hardened
A life unburdened
of guilt, deceit, failure
Honesty
the only true road to success
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Old 11-11-2003, 10:48 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Lost

I've lost a friend
I don't know where she is gone
I don't know why she is gone

I've lost a friend
I know she is still here
I know she is not responding

I've lost a friend
Did I ever really have her
Was she ever really a friend

I've lost a friend
Can you help me find her
Can you help me start over

I've lost a friend
Could be forever
Could be she is not gone

MAybe I haven't lost a friend
Maybe she is busy
Maybe she has technical difficulties

Will I ever know
For now she is lost
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Old 11-17-2003, 07:21 AM   #10 (permalink)
Is In Love
 
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How'd I miss those last two?

Very good, I like them
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Old 11-17-2003, 08:56 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Relief

Zip.

The steady stream bursts forth
slamming the porcelain with such force
going, going
slowly letting up
the last few drops tinkling into the bowl

Zip
Flush

Ah, sweet relief
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Old 11-17-2003, 03:01 PM   #12 (permalink)
Is In Love
 
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Ha! I love it!
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Old 11-18-2003, 06:03 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Flipped and Burned

Traffic slows
flashing lights appear
off to the right
other side of the road
a faint trail of smoke
rising from the tree-line

Ambulances, fire trucks, and police
the emergency triumverate

And there it lays
on its side in the grass
roof crushed
blackened by the fire
looks to have once been a Dodge
a painful end for a strong truck

Never saw the driver
did they live
did they die
been there, done that
flashes through my mind
I can laugh about it
but can they

It's officially called Technology Corridor
but to those that drive it
brave it every day
it is known as
Accident Alley
we have all seen them flipped and burned
we have all met the emergency triumverate


Based on the aftermath of an accident I saw this morning. I really have been there before, I got lucky there was no fire when mine happened.
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Old 11-21-2003, 09:53 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Chopper

Cold gleaming steel
shiny flashing chrome
the curves so flowing
the heart so strong
the feel is that
of a taught body
the look is that
of the naked female form
so exciting
so dangerous
and then it purrs
but to hear it roar
is the real thrill
to feel it vibrate
the power
the strength
the speed
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Old 02-10-2004, 06:01 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Nocturnals

As the streetlamps begin to light
And the darkness begins its nightly descent
The oldies play on the radio
Like some movie scene the small-town dusk activities begin
The rush from the fields and factories to home or bar
Windows begin to light
As the streets shut-down and the wind begins to blow
A feeling creeps in
Desolate and desparate
Now is when the Nocturnals begin to stir
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