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Old 11-03-2003, 10:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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New Work

Where are you at?
I know you're here...
I can still smell your perfume on my pillow
Taste your sweetness on my lips
Feel your warmth in my arms

I reach for you at night, while I lay in bed
My hands only grasp hollow air
And long for your shapely body
Where are you at?

I know you're here...
I can still see your shining face
Your radiant smile
Your starlit eyes

I chase after you in my dreams
Always coming up empty
Your are my elusive prey
My yearning
I wake tired and weary from the chase

Loneliness
Denial
Heartache
Longing

I know you're not here
But I wish you were
My earth-bound angel
My mistress of miles
Separated souls and hearts.

With you, miles away
Is a portion of my heart and soul
I hope you hold them dear
But only temporarily

The time will come when we always be together
Now, Then, Forever
Our lives are destined to intertwine
And merge into one complete life

Is this life Eden?
Heaven on Earth?
I think so.
My earth-bound angel.
I miss you
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Old 11-03-2003, 10:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very well done, thank you I like this stanza the most

Quote:
I know you're not here
But I wish you were
My earth-bound angel
My mistress of miles
Separated souls and hearts.
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Old 11-04-2003, 08:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Very Nice! Keep up the good work!
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Old 11-06-2003, 04:58 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice

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Originally posted by NiceGuy
Very Nice! Keep up the good work!
I agree. This is really good. Thanks
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Old 11-06-2003, 09:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks
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Old 11-09-2003, 12:48 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Good job. I really liked this one.
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