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First Kiss
When I stood next to you,
my stomache used to turn and my tongue used to roll and my heart used to flutter. There was always something I wanted to say. I always had the words prepared. But when I opened my mouth to tell you, it always seemed that no words could do my feelings justice. And so it went. On that day, I was still trying to say it. Then I looked at you, and I saw your beautiful face and your beautiful smile. I realized suddenly that you were going to kiss me. I remember each instance. It was as though I was in a movie, and each frame lasted an eternity. My head was spinning, I didn't know how this was possible. I felt like I was floating. I was overcome with happiness. When your lips finally touched mine, I melted away. I can't even begin to describe the euphoria, the incredible peace I felt. And now you're gone again. And my heart is lonely again. I still feel your lips on mine, and I long to hold you. But you're drifting away from me. Like a ghost of a happy past. I can see you there, but you're so far away. Come back to me. |
beautiful but sad. It sucks when they go away but, "that's the way love goes."
nice work |
WOWWWW...... Very touching me....... Thanks
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Very touching
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I remeber that feeling and so I long for that...
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i think everyone feels that way at some stage...beautiful poem - good work!
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Beautiful work! I'm impressed! Keep it up!
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I remember my first kiss. And the best part is that I'm still with him and every kiss is just like the first one only better. It was the angel in the broom closet that did it.
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aw man...now i gotta go around missing my ex...
an excellent poem with great images-i was there all the way. |
great stuff, really touched a part of my past that I usually dont go..
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great job man
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