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Esen · 10-27-2003, 04:20 PM

Painted night

Seamless is the sky
empty is the rain
orange painted tourents
wasted away in vain,
Sweet is your sanity
holding me tight and secure
everlasting happiness
no need for an angels cure,
antidotes are vanquishing
falling though the light
hyperdermic symphanies
injected into the masses tonight,
All of the passions of harmonics
beckoning our fears to come
this is when our sight is eased
speak, for now the evening is done.

riptide4070 · 10-27-2003, 04:32 PM

beautiful work!

Minx · 10-28-2003, 01:29 PM

Great work Chauncey! I really like the way your words flow in this one...just super!

mb99usa · 10-28-2003, 01:35 PM

Feels like you are sliding from one line to the next. Very smooth.

J.R.V.A. · 10-28-2003, 03:48 PM

Good work, thanks

Esen · 10-28-2003, 04:09 PM

Thanks guys, that is very Kind of you.
Your words mean a lot to me due to the literature board is the center of the tfp community for me.

I hold all of your words and stories dear.

10-27-2003, 04:20 PM	#1 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Painted night Painted night Seamless is the sky empty is the rain orange painted tourents wasted away in vain, Sweet is your sanity holding me tight and secure everlasting happiness no need for an angels cure, antidotes are vanquishing falling though the light hyperdermic symphanies injected into the masses tonight, All of the passions of harmonics beckoning our fears to come this is when our sight is eased speak, for now the evening is done. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

10-27-2003, 04:32 PM	#2 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	beautiful work! __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

10-28-2003, 01:29 PM	#3 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	Great work Chauncey! I really like the way your words flow in this one...just super! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

10-28-2003, 01:35 PM	#4 (permalink)
mb99usa Keep on rolling. It only hurts for a little while. Location: wherever I am	Feels like you are sliding from one line to the next. Very smooth. __________________ So, what's your point? It's not an attitude, it's a way of life.

10-28-2003, 03:48 PM	#5 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Good work, thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-28-2003, 04:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Thanks guys, that is very Kind of you. Your words mean a lot to me due to the literature board is the center of the tfp community for me. I hold all of your words and stories dear. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?