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Somenosuke · 04-27-2003, 09:11 PM

This is something I wrote a few months back, and I have tweaked it a bit this evening to make it more suitable for posting. If strong sexual content offends you, don't read it.

ALSO: This story is a bit longish, so don't read it unless you have a little while.
(This story is originally untitled, but I figured I'd toss a title on for posting purposes.)

Bound Bliss

I wake up in my own bed, or, what I believe is my own bed, and it is dark outside. I sit up and look around, realizing I am in a strange room, and in a strange bed. I try to get out of the bed, but as I move my legs, I feel resistance, and cuffs on my ankles. I move the blankets aside to find my legs chained to the bedposts. Panic immediately fills my mind as I try to think of a way to get out of this predicament. My whole world goes black abruptly, as a thick hood is pulled over my head, and my wrists are seized and cuffed together behind my back. Before I can protest, a dildo gag is shoved into my mouth through the opening in the hood, and secured tightly at the back of my head.

I feel something being placed around my neck. A collar? Something is attached to it, and my ankles are released. I feel a quick tug on my collar, and realize that it is a leash that has been attached to it. I get out of the bed and walk obediently in the direction I am being pulled, knowing that the less I fight, the better the chances are of little harm coming to me. I hope. I am led into another room, silently wondering what it is that shall be done to me. I feel my clothes being cut away with a knife, and pulled from my body quickly. I shiver as the slightly chilly air in the room hits me, goosebumps forming all over me.

My panties are carefully cut and removed, and now I stand naked, shaking somewhat out of fear, and also from being chilled. The cuffs are taken off my wrists, and my arms are pulled forward to be tied, this time with rope. My arms are then lifted above my head, the rope placed on a hook, which is pulled upward, pulling me with it until I am forced to stand on the tips of my toes. This becomes uncomfortable very quickly, and I squirm a bit, wishing for more slack. My efforts to decrease my discomfort are answered quickly, as I feel a latex covered finger wriggle between the cheeks of my rear, coated with lube. The finger teases the tight pucker of my anus roughly, before it snakes its way inside. I bite down on the dildo gag harshly, whimpering and squirming as best I can in my current position.

The finger moves around a bit, and in and out slowly, preparing me for what's to come. The finger slips out, and is replaced with a small butt plug, coated generously with lube. As the plug is inserted, my muscles tense up in an attempt to push it out, but the resistance is not enough, and the plug is shoved in. I feel hands on my legs, pulling them apart and stroking my inner thighs. I feel something smooth and slick being dragged over the outer lips of my sex, and my body trembles in response. Without warning or preparation, the object is shoved inside me, filling me completely. The butt plug is tugged gently, and pulled out partially, then is thrust back inside me once again, and this continues for a moment, before it is shoved back in and left to sit. My legs are then guided into some sort of leather garment, and it is pulled up to my waist and tightened. I feel a thin, wide strip covering my violated orifices, holding the plugs in place. I squirm a bit, as the plugs are somewhat uncomfortable, and I realize I am now wearing a chastity belt. My shoulders have begun to ache terribly, but there is no relief in sight any time soon. I am left in this position for what feels like many hours, all of my orifices filled, my body completely available for whatever activities strike my captor's fancy.

After a long period of silence and discomfort, the gag is removed from my mouth, my arms are let down, and I am forced to sit on my knees. My leash is connected to a ring on the floor, so that I cannot escape. My wrists are once again handcuffed behind my back, and I sense someone standing before me. A hand is placed under my chin, lifting my face upwards, and I feel something firm placed against my lips. It feels like a penis. I am ordered to suck, but am reluctant. A hand tugs on my hair firmly, and I am ordered once again to suck the penis that is attempting to force itself past my lips. I finally open my mouth. A pair of hands grips my head firmly, pushing my head forward, and I suck on the invading organ vigorously, hoping to please my captors. My attention is slightly diverted as the chastity belt is removed, along with the plugs. I let out a tiny sigh of relief, but I am foolish to think that relief will last long.

The penis is pulled from my mouth momentarily, and the hood is pulled off my head, but instantly replaced with a blindfold before I have a chance to open my eyes. The leash is removed from the ring in the floor, and I am ordered to stand up. I stand up immediately, and I am pulled forward. I am pushed onto a soft surface.. a bed. My hands are tied to the headboard, and I sit there on my knees, tugging at the rope, though I know it is futile. I notice the bed sinking on one side, and realize someone has decided to join me. Fingers tickle my sides lightly, and I feel arms wrapping around my waist, and a very erect penis pressing against my rear. His hands explore me slowly, starting at my neck, trickling down my breasts and stopping at my nipples momentarily to pinch them. He takes his time rolling them between his fingers slowly, effectively rendering them erect.

He rubs his penis against my eager sex lightly, teasing my clit with the tip, and I quietly beg him to take me. He leans back slightly, and I wait patiently for him to enter me. I gasp as I feel him pressing the swollen head of his member against my still tense ass. I tense up even more, fearing pain should he try and take me there, and a shiver scurries up my spine as I feel cold lube being spread over the newly deflowered orifice. With a quick thrust, he is inside me, and I yelp softly, my anus burning with a dull pain. He buries himself inside me as far as possible, his hands gripping my hips as he gyrates against my rear. The pain quickly fades to pleasure, and I attempt to move against him, but he holds me in place, and starts to thrust into me with a gentle rhythm. I feel the bed sink again, and another body slides beneath me, forcing me to straddle it. It is another man. He grabs my leash and pulls me down a bit, kissing me hard on the lips, snaking his hot, slippery tongue into my mouth and exploring leisurely.

He sucks my tongue firmly, playfully capturing the stud in my tongue between his teeth. His hands grip my waist, pulling my lower body downwards slightly. The man behind me continues to thrust into me slowly, grinding his hips against my rear, and taking his time. I feel the penis of the man beneath me pressing against the opening of my sex, and I squirm a bit, attempting to take him inside. I feel the head slip in, and I whimper softly, pleading for him to fill me completely. He teases me for a bit, sliding inside me little by little, then pulling out again. I desperately try to get the full length of him inside, but he continues to tease me, and I finally give up. Realizing that I have stopped trying, he gingerly thrusts up into me, bringing a soft yelp of pleasure from my lips. I tug on the ropes binding my wrists to the headboard, growling quietly, enjoying the feeling of being completely filled. The two men gradually begin to thrust into me faster, groaning and grunting softly. The man behind me kisses and bites my shoulder roughly, and the man beneath me plays with my breasts, squeezing them as he sucks my nipples hungrily. The bed sinks yet again, but I am by now too lost in my pleasure to notice. I feel a hand grip my hair gently, pulling my face up. My mouth is yet again greeted, by another penis. I willingly open my mouth, letting it lodge itself between my lips, and this third man begins to thrust his penis into my mouth eagerly.

The men beneath and behind me settle into alternate rhythms, the man inside my ass pulling out while the man in my vagina thrusts in, their speeds gradually increasing. I happily suck the penis in my mouth, my shrill moans muffled as it repeatedly slips in and out of my throat. Out of nowhere, all three men seem to get on the same wavelength suddenly, as they all begin pounding me savagely, thrusting with reckless abandon. The stimulation finally proves to be too much for me, and I descend into a bright abyss of ecstasy and sheer orgasmic delight, my body jerking and quivering with the power of my climax, my ass and vagina convulsing wildly around their invaders. The men all continue thrusting, and I feel the penis inside my mouth expand slightly, and hot jets of semen are delivered into my mouth and throat, which I swallow, not allowing a single drop to escape. The man behind me climaxes soon after, roaring out almost frighteningly as he explodes inside my ass, coating my insides thoroughly. The man beneath me grunts loudly, pulling out of me and spraying my stomach and breasts with his steamy essence.

The third man pulls out of my mouth and hops off the bed, untying my wrists, and I collapse on top of the second man, moaning softly as the first man pulls out of my ass. The man beneath me gently slides me off of him, wiping me off with a towel, and I am turned onto my back, my wrists once again secured to the headboard, and I am told to rest as I am covered with a blanket.

i8one2 · 04-27-2003, 09:29 PM

My Friend, I could on and on, but for now let me tell you" I was in your space" And that says alot..
With such a grand and vivid expression that you have shared, I may share mine some day very soon as well, except for one thing, in may or may not of been a fantasy but and actual reality.
Thank you so much. I am very very impressed with this work of yours and the time you have spent has paid off.

Somenosuke · 04-27-2003, 09:40 PM

i8one2, thank you very much for the kind comments. I was really shy about posting the story, because I'm even more critical of the stories I write than my poetry. Your comments have instilled some confidence in me. Thanks.

scarebearjinx · 04-28-2003, 12:55 PM

i loved it. it was well written and i could easily visualize it. i love bdsm fantsies anyway.

being critical of your work isn't a bad thing, i'm critical of my poetry. i believe it shows how much work you have put into your writing. i hope to read more.

Lebell · 04-28-2003, 01:27 PM

I would not post this if it was not truthful:

That was a very very good story, both visually and stylistically. You had me completely enthralled and shivering too as I read it.

Please feel free to post this sort of work again.

vveronica · 10-24-2003, 06:45 AM

wonderful... It makes me want to get out the toys and boys to play. Excellent, but, I do want desperately to read the next chapter..

04-27-2003, 09:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
Somenosuke Insane Location: The 7th Level..	BDSM-y story/fantasy kind of thing. Read at your own risk. :) This is something I wrote a few months back, and I have tweaked it a bit this evening to make it more suitable for posting. If strong sexual content offends you, don't read it. ALSO: This story is a bit longish, so don't read it unless you have a little while. (This story is originally untitled, but I figured I'd toss a title on for posting purposes.) Bound Bliss I wake up in my own bed, or, what I believe is my own bed, and it is dark outside. I sit up and look around, realizing I am in a strange room, and in a strange bed. I try to get out of the bed, but as I move my legs, I feel resistance, and cuffs on my ankles. I move the blankets aside to find my legs chained to the bedposts. Panic immediately fills my mind as I try to think of a way to get out of this predicament. My whole world goes black abruptly, as a thick hood is pulled over my head, and my wrists are seized and cuffed together behind my back. Before I can protest, a dildo gag is shoved into my mouth through the opening in the hood, and secured tightly at the back of my head. I feel something being placed around my neck. A collar? Something is attached to it, and my ankles are released. I feel a quick tug on my collar, and realize that it is a leash that has been attached to it. I get out of the bed and walk obediently in the direction I am being pulled, knowing that the less I fight, the better the chances are of little harm coming to me. I hope. I am led into another room, silently wondering what it is that shall be done to me. I feel my clothes being cut away with a knife, and pulled from my body quickly. I shiver as the slightly chilly air in the room hits me, goosebumps forming all over me. My panties are carefully cut and removed, and now I stand naked, shaking somewhat out of fear, and also from being chilled. The cuffs are taken off my wrists, and my arms are pulled forward to be tied, this time with rope. My arms are then lifted above my head, the rope placed on a hook, which is pulled upward, pulling me with it until I am forced to stand on the tips of my toes. This becomes uncomfortable very quickly, and I squirm a bit, wishing for more slack. My efforts to decrease my discomfort are answered quickly, as I feel a latex covered finger wriggle between the cheeks of my rear, coated with lube. The finger teases the tight pucker of my anus roughly, before it snakes its way inside. I bite down on the dildo gag harshly, whimpering and squirming as best I can in my current position. The finger moves around a bit, and in and out slowly, preparing me for what's to come. The finger slips out, and is replaced with a small butt plug, coated generously with lube. As the plug is inserted, my muscles tense up in an attempt to push it out, but the resistance is not enough, and the plug is shoved in. I feel hands on my legs, pulling them apart and stroking my inner thighs. I feel something smooth and slick being dragged over the outer lips of my sex, and my body trembles in response. Without warning or preparation, the object is shoved inside me, filling me completely. The butt plug is tugged gently, and pulled out partially, then is thrust back inside me once again, and this continues for a moment, before it is shoved back in and left to sit. My legs are then guided into some sort of leather garment, and it is pulled up to my waist and tightened. I feel a thin, wide strip covering my violated orifices, holding the plugs in place. I squirm a bit, as the plugs are somewhat uncomfortable, and I realize I am now wearing a chastity belt. My shoulders have begun to ache terribly, but there is no relief in sight any time soon. I am left in this position for what feels like many hours, all of my orifices filled, my body completely available for whatever activities strike my captor's fancy. After a long period of silence and discomfort, the gag is removed from my mouth, my arms are let down, and I am forced to sit on my knees. My leash is connected to a ring on the floor, so that I cannot escape. My wrists are once again handcuffed behind my back, and I sense someone standing before me. A hand is placed under my chin, lifting my face upwards, and I feel something firm placed against my lips. It feels like a penis. I am ordered to suck, but am reluctant. A hand tugs on my hair firmly, and I am ordered once again to suck the penis that is attempting to force itself past my lips. I finally open my mouth. A pair of hands grips my head firmly, pushing my head forward, and I suck on the invading organ vigorously, hoping to please my captors. My attention is slightly diverted as the chastity belt is removed, along with the plugs. I let out a tiny sigh of relief, but I am foolish to think that relief will last long. The penis is pulled from my mouth momentarily, and the hood is pulled off my head, but instantly replaced with a blindfold before I have a chance to open my eyes. The leash is removed from the ring in the floor, and I am ordered to stand up. I stand up immediately, and I am pulled forward. I am pushed onto a soft surface.. a bed. My hands are tied to the headboard, and I sit there on my knees, tugging at the rope, though I know it is futile. I notice the bed sinking on one side, and realize someone has decided to join me. Fingers tickle my sides lightly, and I feel arms wrapping around my waist, and a very erect penis pressing against my rear. His hands explore me slowly, starting at my neck, trickling down my breasts and stopping at my nipples momentarily to pinch them. He takes his time rolling them between his fingers slowly, effectively rendering them erect. He rubs his penis against my eager sex lightly, teasing my clit with the tip, and I quietly beg him to take me. He leans back slightly, and I wait patiently for him to enter me. I gasp as I feel him pressing the swollen head of his member against my still tense ass. I tense up even more, fearing pain should he try and take me there, and a shiver scurries up my spine as I feel cold lube being spread over the newly deflowered orifice. With a quick thrust, he is inside me, and I yelp softly, my anus burning with a dull pain. He buries himself inside me as far as possible, his hands gripping my hips as he gyrates against my rear. The pain quickly fades to pleasure, and I attempt to move against him, but he holds me in place, and starts to thrust into me with a gentle rhythm. I feel the bed sink again, and another body slides beneath me, forcing me to straddle it. It is another man. He grabs my leash and pulls me down a bit, kissing me hard on the lips, snaking his hot, slippery tongue into my mouth and exploring leisurely. He sucks my tongue firmly, playfully capturing the stud in my tongue between his teeth. His hands grip my waist, pulling my lower body downwards slightly. The man behind me continues to thrust into me slowly, grinding his hips against my rear, and taking his time. I feel the penis of the man beneath me pressing against the opening of my sex, and I squirm a bit, attempting to take him inside. I feel the head slip in, and I whimper softly, pleading for him to fill me completely. He teases me for a bit, sliding inside me little by little, then pulling out again. I desperately try to get the full length of him inside, but he continues to tease me, and I finally give up. Realizing that I have stopped trying, he gingerly thrusts up into me, bringing a soft yelp of pleasure from my lips. I tug on the ropes binding my wrists to the headboard, growling quietly, enjoying the feeling of being completely filled. The two men gradually begin to thrust into me faster, groaning and grunting softly. The man behind me kisses and bites my shoulder roughly, and the man beneath me plays with my breasts, squeezing them as he sucks my nipples hungrily. The bed sinks yet again, but I am by now too lost in my pleasure to notice. I feel a hand grip my hair gently, pulling my face up. My mouth is yet again greeted, by another penis. I willingly open my mouth, letting it lodge itself between my lips, and this third man begins to thrust his penis into my mouth eagerly. The men beneath and behind me settle into alternate rhythms, the man inside my ass pulling out while the man in my vagina thrusts in, their speeds gradually increasing. I happily suck the penis in my mouth, my shrill moans muffled as it repeatedly slips in and out of my throat. Out of nowhere, all three men seem to get on the same wavelength suddenly, as they all begin pounding me savagely, thrusting with reckless abandon. The stimulation finally proves to be too much for me, and I descend into a bright abyss of ecstasy and sheer orgasmic delight, my body jerking and quivering with the power of my climax, my ass and vagina convulsing wildly around their invaders. The men all continue thrusting, and I feel the penis inside my mouth expand slightly, and hot jets of semen are delivered into my mouth and throat, which I swallow, not allowing a single drop to escape. The man behind me climaxes soon after, roaring out almost frighteningly as he explodes inside my ass, coating my insides thoroughly. The man beneath me grunts loudly, pulling out of me and spraying my stomach and breasts with his steamy essence. The third man pulls out of my mouth and hops off the bed, untying my wrists, and I collapse on top of the second man, moaning softly as the first man pulls out of my ass. The man beneath me gently slides me off of him, wiping me off with a towel, and I am turned onto my back, my wrists once again secured to the headboard, and I am told to rest as I am covered with a blanket. __________________ Sex is not the answer. Sex is the question. Yes is the answer.

04-27-2003, 09:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
i8one2 COMPLETED and A TRAINER Location: BEAN_TOWN	My Friend, I could on and on, but for now let me tell you" I was in your space" And that says alot.. With such a grand and vivid expression that you have shared, I may share mine some day very soon as well, except for one thing, in may or may not of been a fantasy but and actual reality. Thank you so much. I am very very impressed with this work of yours and the time you have spent has paid off. __________________ LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC" "Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad" Quality is for those who know what they want and are at peace with what they have. "S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker

04-27-2003, 09:40 PM	#3 (permalink)
Somenosuke Insane Location: The 7th Level..	i8one2, thank you very much for the kind comments. I was really shy about posting the story, because I'm even more critical of the stories I write than my poetry. Your comments have instilled some confidence in me. Thanks. __________________ Sex is not the answer. Sex is the question. Yes is the answer.

04-28-2003, 01:27 PM	#5 (permalink)
Lebell Cracking the Whip Location: Sexymama's arms...	I would not post this if it was not truthful: That was a very very good story, both visually and stylistically. You had me completely enthralled and shivering too as I read it. Please feel free to post this sort of work again. __________________ "Of all tyrannies, a tyranny exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It may be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron's cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end, for they do so with the approval of their own conscience." – C. S. Lewis The ONLY sponsors we have are YOU! Please Donate!

10-24-2003, 06:45 AM	#6 (permalink)
vveronica Psycho Location: northern california	wonderful... It makes me want to get out the toys and boys to play. Excellent, but, I do want desperately to read the next chapter.. __________________ ...We find ourselves in a struggle for our very right to exsist... We will not go quietly into the night... We will not give up without a fight...

04-28-2003, 12:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	i loved it. it was well written and i could easily visualize it. i love bdsm fantsies anyway. being critical of your work isn't a bad thing, i'm critical of my poetry. i believe it shows how much work you have put into your writing. i hope to read more.