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fallen_angel 10-18-2003 09:31 PM

Me
 
My body hurts
Like tiny knives
Stabbing me all over
I lay still
Movement prevokes the pain
The codene isnt working
Nothing works
No matter how much i take

Im not dependent
Im not strung out
At least i dont think i am
I feel like my body is rejecting me
Everything is breaking
I try but i cant fix myself
Im falling apart
Slowly yet fully consumming myself
In pain

riptide4070 10-28-2003 03:47 PM

Sad poem. When things go bad and there's no love to be had, it's hard to know what to do and in which direction to go.

good stuff! -I always enjoy reading your work

J.R.V.A. 10-28-2003 03:50 PM

You write soooo good. Thanks for sharing your emotions with us.

ForgottenKnight 11-01-2003 01:04 PM

That's a wonderful way of putting words to something so sad.


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