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fallen_angel · 10-18-2003, 09:31 PM

My body hurts
Like tiny knives
Stabbing me all over
I lay still
Movement prevokes the pain
The codene isnt working
Nothing works
No matter how much i take

Im not dependent
Im not strung out
At least i dont think i am
I feel like my body is rejecting me
Everything is breaking
I try but i cant fix myself
Im falling apart
Slowly yet fully consumming myself
In pain

riptide4070 · 10-28-2003, 03:47 PM

Sad poem. When things go bad and there's no love to be had, it's hard to know what to do and in which direction to go.

good stuff! -I always enjoy reading your work

J.R.V.A. · 10-28-2003, 03:50 PM

You write soooo good. Thanks for sharing your emotions with us.

ForgottenKnight · 11-01-2003, 01:04 PM

That's a wonderful way of putting words to something so sad.

10-18-2003, 09:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Me My body hurts Like tiny knives Stabbing me all over I lay still Movement prevokes the pain The codene isnt working Nothing works No matter how much i take Im not dependent Im not strung out At least i dont think i am I feel like my body is rejecting me Everything is breaking I try but i cant fix myself Im falling apart Slowly yet fully consumming myself In pain __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

10-28-2003, 03:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	Sad poem. When things go bad and there's no love to be had, it's hard to know what to do and in which direction to go. good stuff! -I always enjoy reading your work __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

10-28-2003, 03:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	You write soooo good. Thanks for sharing your emotions with us. __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

11-01-2003, 01:04 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	That's a wonderful way of putting words to something so sad. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"