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my soul is gone
I've been blessed in life
with love not having to worry about anything I've done, but when my pain erupts it burns everything in my view I died the day that I lost you You were the one to make me feel. when you saw my smile your wounds would all heal, you said I smelled like sweet sunshine so I made you mine only love inspires me to love myself someone to show me what I'm worth now she's gone and won't ever come back and like a heart attack that lasts all day long my soul is gone when I was scared you were at my side and I'd hold you when you cried, I've been there for you through so many tough times now that you've gone away I'm paying... for all my crimes Yes, I'm the one who fell out out of my love and into greed thinking I'd find someone better more up to the task it's been almost one year and I've lost my grasp on my heart Only love inspires me to love myself someone to show me what I'm worth now she's gone and won't ever come back and like a heart attack that lasts all day long my soul is gone I scream unto the heavens "why do you deny me this?" a little voice inside me says "where is your patience?" that's a trait of the strong and I'm so weak too hurt and feeble to cry I see her from time to time and I want to speak but there's nothing I could ever say to make the pain go away. |
I like the way you write, thanks for lettting me read this
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yeah you style of writing is very good, i agree with JVRA.
i hope the pain is relieved soon... |
i agree with everyone, i really like your style. and i wish you happiness and brighter days
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Put me down for liking this as well.
Thanks for sharing with us. |
Yes, love does indeed leave you feelin' as dead as yesterday.
BTW - awesome poem. |
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