Broken
 

Please help me
I'm breaking down
Slowly, yet consistantly
I fall deeper
Closer to my breaking point
My will has been bent
My mind and body ache
My future is unclear
I'm falling
My wings have been broken
Under a burden I can no longer bear
The end is ahead
Racing into my line of vision
I'm swimming in a thick fog
Of my own making
My fall has ended
I am broken

I like your poems , thank you for sharing them

As deep and moving as your work is, and as much as I enjoy it, I'd give much to instill a happiness in you that brings forth a poem from your soul filled with contentment.

*hugs*

This is a very good piece of work.
~Angel~

i am currently at a point in my life that is drepressingly bleak. Nothing is going right and everything i do feels wrong. Im just glad i have this outlet because in my earlier times i did not have this luxury and turned to other ways to cope.

hauntingly familiar-i have such a memory of being in that place in life. may peace be with you...

my life is depressing and yet so joyful at the same time. I feel lost. I'm waiting to find my inner strength, but not as before. It must reach new heights so I can be happy and prolific.

I feel your words, through and through.