Hateful Eroticism (graphic)
 

She knelt down in front of him, her breasts resting on his thick, hairy thighs. He laid back on the bed - comfortable, relaxed. Already, his cock was fully engorged, peaking at its entire four and a half inch length. She smiled up at him, even knowing he couldn't see her face - he probably wouldn't have cared anyway. She took his prick in her hand, leading it into the warm, moist recess of her mouth. Her tongue swirled all around it, wetting the head and shaft, massaging gently with her lips. She slid him in and out of her mouth, reaching her other hand under to finger that little space of flesh between his scrotum and asshole. She grinned - well, as best as a girl can grin with a dick in her mouth - hearing him groan, as usual. She pumped his prick with her hand, flicking her tongue over the tip, removing her hand from underneath his balls. Moving down, she ran her tongue up and down the shrivelled skin, the disgusting taste in her mouth now making her nearly gag. It was worth it though, wasn't it? He was happy, and that's all that mattered. She felt his body shudder from her gentle gratifications. He was so close to coming - she could feel the blood pumping against her lips as she took him in her mouth one last time.

And as he poured forth his semen into his waiting receptacle, he moaned not in pleasure, but absolute horror and agony as he felt the cold knife tip sear into the base of his penis. The pain, hot and cruel, swept through his entire body. Ever-so-briefly, he forgot about his pain, as he looked down at the girl who had sworn so many times her love and devotion to him. What...what was she chewing? Darkness overcame him, and even moreso, a darkness had overcome her.

I did not see that coming

wow i liked that; that was definitely a twist[ed] ending

Well now. That took me off guard. Good job at switching our mindset so quickly.
Won't piss her off again! ;)

Oh gosh. Haha! That made me shiver. That was absolutely wild. Hehe. Fabulous.

wow...that's all i can say

im gonna keep my eyes opened next time im getting a bj
hahaha

nice switch there, i like it...

oooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That could be my wife someday

twisted man. i like it.

i hope this isnt a true story

Thanks to all who have commented. My head is not a pleasent place to be - sometimes I have to let these scenes out.

Um, ouch. Simply ouch.

Don't be so hard on yourself though. I think everyone has these images somewhere in their head. It takes great courage to let them out. It's the only way to really deal.

:eek: Whoa, thats, uhhh, creative.

I too have an unpleasant head, so I know where you are coming from.

Excellent work.

eek...cool...but eek

well written, keeps you guessing til the end