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fallen_angel · 09-21-2003, 08:37 PM

A red Rose standing alone
In the middle of a garden
Admired from afar, as only few have touched her
Her beauty is timeless, never fading in the daylight
Yet by night, the moon turns her petals crimson
Thus is her natural color
For she is cursed to forever thrive upon the pain of others
Each person who touches her she pricks
She wills her thorns away, yet they stay
Marring her would be lovers
Staining her petals with thier blood
In turn they curse her for her carelessness
She tries to control her thorns
Smoothing the ends with her need for someone true
Who could look past her crimson red petals
To pluck away her thorns
And make her blossom in the daylight
But her savior never comes, and finally
In the light of day she slowing wilts
Her once beautiful petals fall to the earth
All that remains are her thorns
Stained with her efforts at finding her love
Thus giving her the name
Red Rose

Stillborn · 09-22-2003, 01:56 PM

That was AMAZING, Fallen Angel!

Eowyn_Vala · 09-23-2003, 09:35 AM

*sniff, sniff* truely touching with great imagery

and if you are implying yourself in this, forget about all of it! You will find someone truely meant for you soon enough. And if you need me to I can chase away all the evil guys!

ForgottenKnight · 09-24-2003, 04:30 PM

Very Nice! Thanks for sharing!

Esen · 09-25-2003, 02:33 PM

That was really cool, It is a great story,
And I was able to follow it !

I like your vantage point.

maximus · 09-26-2003, 01:26 AM

wow, simply wow. that was the best peice of writing i have read in a long time.

Angel · 09-27-2003, 12:31 AM

Very good piece of work.
You have a great ability to pull the visual and emotional aspect out in your writing. Quite moving.
Thank you for sharing.

J.R.V.A. · 09-30-2003, 07:36 PM

This was beautiful,Thanks

*Nikki* · 10-05-2003, 06:21 PM

Wonderful.

09-21-2003, 08:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Red Rose A red Rose standing alone In the middle of a garden Admired from afar, as only few have touched her Her beauty is timeless, never fading in the daylight Yet by night, the moon turns her petals crimson Thus is her natural color For she is cursed to forever thrive upon the pain of others Each person who touches her she pricks She wills her thorns away, yet they stay Marring her would be lovers Staining her petals with thier blood In turn they curse her for her carelessness She tries to control her thorns Smoothing the ends with her need for someone true Who could look past her crimson red petals To pluck away her thorns And make her blossom in the daylight But her savior never comes, and finally In the light of day she slowing wilts Her once beautiful petals fall to the earth All that remains are her thorns Stained with her efforts at finding her love Thus giving her the name Red Rose __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 10-02-2003 at 12:13 PM..

09-22-2003, 01:56 PM	#2 (permalink)
Stillborn Tilted Location: Dingden, DE / Centennial, CO	That was AMAZING, Fallen Angel! __________________ Waiting... to be born again Wanting... the saddest kind of pain Waiting for the day when I will crawl away

09-23-2003, 09:35 AM	#3 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	sniff, sniff truely touching with great imagery and if you are implying yourself in this, forget about all of it! You will find someone truely meant for you soon enough. And if you need me to I can chase away all the evil guys! __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

09-24-2003, 04:30 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Very Nice! Thanks for sharing! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

09-25-2003, 02:33 PM	#5 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	That was really cool, It is a great story, And I was able to follow it ! I like your vantage point. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

09-26-2003, 01:26 AM	#6 (permalink)
maximus Crazy Location: Pa	wow, simply wow. that was the best peice of writing i have read in a long time. __________________ i don't want to be lonely, i just want to be alone.

09-27-2003, 12:31 AM	#7 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Very good piece of work. You have a great ability to pull the visual and emotional aspect out in your writing. Quite moving. Thank you for sharing. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

09-30-2003, 07:36 PM	#8 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	This was beautiful,Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-05-2003, 06:21 PM	#9 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	Wonderful.