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Asking Why
I close my eyes
And let the whole world pass me by I just want to let go of this place And run away in time I keep asking why When will you be mine I cant stop thinking about you And how I fell into your eyes My words flow through my mind I keep wishing I could make them dissapear I ask myself why But my words cant be erased I need to find a release So I ask why And I close my eyes Searching deep within Im trying to let go But theres something missing deep inside All these walls trapping me Walls of emotions I cannot describe Memories creeping through the cracks I see your face The look in your eyes I wonder how I got here Why I let myself feel My soul is bleeding I want to stop feeling Let the whole world just pass me by So I can stop Asking why |
This is quite deep and very moving. I have been there in a big way before so it really drives home for me. Thank you for sharing.
PS...I like your sig line. :) |
thanx angel. i like honestly dont know where that sig came from, i was just writing some thoughts in my head and it just fell out. kinda like this poem, i was just depressed and was thinking how i wish i could just get away from everything and take all my words with me. thank you
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Very touching. Beautiful work.
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Awesome:)
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I often ask why.
good stuff! |
You are a true poet.
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"But there's something missing deep inside"
I like this line - it reached right out and grabbed me. Thanks for letting us see a little of yourself. Oh....and happy birthday! :) |
Nice one again, thanks
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