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fallen_angel 10-03-2003 09:24 PM

Asking Why
 
I close my eyes
And let the whole world pass me by
I just want to let go of this place
And run away in time
I keep asking why
When will you be mine
I cant stop thinking about you
And how I fell into your eyes
My words flow through my mind
I keep wishing I could make them dissapear
I ask myself why
But my words cant be erased
I need to find a release
So I ask why
And I close my eyes
Searching deep within
Im trying to let go
But theres something missing deep inside
All these walls trapping me
Walls of emotions I cannot describe
Memories creeping through the cracks
I see your face
The look in your eyes
I wonder how I got here
Why I let myself feel
My soul is bleeding
I want to stop feeling
Let the whole world just pass me by
So I can stop
Asking why

Angel 10-03-2003 09:31 PM

This is quite deep and very moving. I have been there in a big way before so it really drives home for me. Thank you for sharing.

PS...I like your sig line. :)

fallen_angel 10-03-2003 09:52 PM

thanx angel. i like honestly dont know where that sig came from, i was just writing some thoughts in my head and it just fell out. kinda like this poem, i was just depressed and was thinking how i wish i could just get away from everything and take all my words with me. thank you

ForgottenKnight 10-05-2003 09:55 AM

Very touching. Beautiful work.

*Nikki* 10-05-2003 06:18 PM

Awesome:)

riptide4070 10-15-2003 03:44 PM

I often ask why.
good stuff!

Esen 11-23-2003 07:54 AM

You are a true poet.

Minx 11-24-2003 09:03 AM

"But there's something missing deep inside"

I like this line - it reached right out and grabbed me. Thanks for letting us see a little of yourself.

Oh....and happy birthday! :)

J.R.V.A. 11-24-2003 09:38 PM

Nice one again, thanks


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