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fishin · 10-01-2003, 07:47 PM

worries fluttering between the pages of thoughts
a wondrous exposure to see-saw overtures
mingling nuances dancing round my aura
i am home.

matthew330 · 10-01-2003, 08:04 PM

you are a god

ForgottenKnight · 10-01-2003, 08:23 PM

I like it!

Minx · 10-06-2003, 02:10 PM

Short but very full and very good. I enjoyed it!

Esen · 10-07-2003, 03:26 PM

pretty cool.
Sometimes shortness is sweeter

fishin · 10-09-2003, 06:18 PM

Thanks guys. Although I think you are exaggerating a bit there Matthew330!

chavos · 10-09-2003, 07:05 PM

nice mood to it...

more?

fishin · 10-10-2003, 06:48 AM

Angel · 10-11-2003, 03:22 PM

I really like this. Sometimes short and to the point can be so powerful. Hope to see more.

J.R.V.A. · 10-17-2003, 05:53 AM

Sounds like my house lol
Thanks

10-01-2003, 07:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
fishin Crazy	eyes half open worries fluttering between the pages of thoughts a wondrous exposure to see-saw overtures mingling nuances dancing round my aura i am home.

10-01-2003, 08:23 PM	#3 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I like it! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-06-2003, 02:10 PM	#4 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	Short but very full and very good. I enjoyed it! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

10-07-2003, 03:26 PM	#5 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	pretty cool. Sometimes shortness is sweeter __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

10-09-2003, 06:18 PM	#6 (permalink)
fishin Crazy	Thanks guys. Although I think you are exaggerating a bit there Matthew330! __________________ liberals rule. phhtt.

10-09-2003, 07:05 PM	#7 (permalink)
chavos Banned Location: St. Paul, MN	nice mood to it... more?

10-10-2003, 06:48 AM	#8 (permalink)
fishin Crazy	http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...threadid=29787 __________________ liberals rule. phhtt.

10-11-2003, 03:22 PM	#9 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	I really like this. Sometimes short and to the point can be so powerful. Hope to see more. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-17-2003, 05:53 AM	#10 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Sounds like my house lol Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart