Kyp

For the girl I should have seen so long ago, and my blindfold only recently came off.

Not matter how hard I try
I can't understand why
You are so good to me

How could it be
That you love me
I'm nobody in this world

You've given me so much
I love to feel your touch
And your lips taste so sweet

But I'll always be here
As I lose my fear
Of all I've never known

You gave me back my dreams
Sometimes it seems
That I am still asleep

If this is all fake
I don't want to be awake
Please let me sleep forever

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When life gives you lemons, sqeeze the juice into a squirt gun and shoot people in the eyes

maximus

very nice, she must be a special girl.

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i don't want to be lonely, i just want to be alone.

QuasiMojo

rock on

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AzAbOv ZoBeLoE

little limey

There's a Dandy Warhol's song called "sleep" and it has a line "if i could sleep forever" in it. You should check it out.

Also, nice rhyme scheme; it's subtle and, therefore nice.

ForgottenKnight

Very good! She must have touched your soul in a way you never thought possibe.

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"People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

minyn

everyone does.

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"Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye"
~A3 "woke up this morning"

"Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

J.R.V.A.

Pretty cool...Thanks

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

Angel

Very nice.
Embrace that feeling!

~Angel~

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In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Kyp's Girl

I LOVE YOU KYP!!!
You are and always will be the greatest guy in the entire world. Don't try to convince me otherwise because you will not win.

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I'm like a superhero with no power or motivation.

Amarth

Wow. Very good! It flowed nicely, had a nice rhythym, and had a deep point. A hard combination to achieve. I loved it!