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Kyp · 09-25-2003, 01:20 AM

For the girl I should have seen so long ago, and my blindfold only recently came off.

Not matter how hard I try
I can't understand why
You are so good to me

How could it be
That you love me
I'm nobody in this world

You've given me so much
I love to feel your touch
And your lips taste so sweet

But I'll always be here
As I lose my fear
Of all I've never known

You gave me back my dreams
Sometimes it seems
That I am still asleep

If this is all fake
I don't want to be awake
Please let me sleep forever

maximus · 09-26-2003, 01:28 AM

very nice, she must be a special girl.

QuasiMojo · 09-26-2003, 09:15 PM

rock on

little limey · 09-27-2003, 09:22 PM

There's a Dandy Warhol's song called "sleep" and it has a line "if i could sleep forever" in it. You should check it out.

Also, nice rhyme scheme; it's subtle and, therefore nice.

ForgottenKnight · 09-28-2003, 09:05 AM

Very good! She must have touched your soul in a way you never thought possibe.

minyn · 09-29-2003, 07:58 PM

everyone does.

J.R.V.A. · 09-30-2003, 08:07 PM

Pretty cool...Thanks

Angel · 10-01-2003, 03:40 PM

Very nice.
Embrace that feeling!

~Angel~

Kyp's Girl · 11-21-2003, 11:50 PM

I LOVE YOU KYP!!!
You are and always will be the greatest guy in the entire world. Don't try to convince me otherwise because you will not win.

Amarth · 11-22-2003, 11:56 AM

Wow. Very good! It flowed nicely, had a nice rhythym, and had a deep point. A hard combination to achieve. I loved it!

09-25-2003, 01:20 AM	#1 (permalink)
Kyp Insane Location: Oregon	Let Me Sleep Forever For the girl I should have seen so long ago, and my blindfold only recently came off. Not matter how hard I try I can't understand why You are so good to me How could it be That you love me I'm nobody in this world You've given me so much I love to feel your touch And your lips taste so sweet But I'll always be here As I lose my fear Of all I've never known You gave me back my dreams Sometimes it seems That I am still asleep If this is all fake I don't want to be awake Please let me sleep forever __________________ When life gives you lemons, sqeeze the juice into a squirt gun and shoot people in the eyes Last edited by Kyp; 09-25-2003 at 01:22 AM..

09-26-2003, 01:28 AM	#2 (permalink)
maximus Crazy Location: Pa	very nice, she must be a special girl. __________________ i don't want to be lonely, i just want to be alone.

09-26-2003, 09:15 PM	#3 (permalink)
QuasiMojo King Knave Location: Lancaster	rock on __________________ AzAbOv ZoBeLoE

09-28-2003, 09:05 AM	#5 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Very good! She must have touched your soul in a way you never thought possibe. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

09-29-2003, 07:58 PM	#6 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	everyone does. __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

09-27-2003, 09:22 PM	#4 (permalink)
little limey Psycho Location: Room Nineteen	There's a Dandy Warhol's song called "sleep" and it has a line "if i could sleep forever" in it. You should check it out. Also, nice rhyme scheme; it's subtle and, therefore nice.

09-30-2003, 08:07 PM	#7 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Pretty cool...Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-01-2003, 03:40 PM	#8 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Very nice. Embrace that feeling! ~Angel~ __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

11-21-2003, 11:50 PM	#9 (permalink)
Kyp's Girl Upright Location: Oregon	I LOVE YOU KYP!!! You are and always will be the greatest guy in the entire world. Don't try to convince me otherwise because you will not win. __________________ I'm like a superhero with no power or motivation. Last edited by Kyp's Girl; 11-22-2003 at 12:11 AM..

11-22-2003, 11:56 AM	#10 (permalink)
Amarth Loser Location: About 50,000 feet in the air... oh shit.	Wow. Very good! It flowed nicely, had a nice rhythym, and had a deep point. A hard combination to achieve. I loved it!