Let Me Sleep Forever
 

For the girl I should have seen so long ago, and my blindfold only recently came off.

Not matter how hard I try
I can't understand why
You are so good to me

How could it be
That you love me
I'm nobody in this world

You've given me so much
I love to feel your touch
And your lips taste so sweet

But I'll always be here
As I lose my fear
Of all I've never known

You gave me back my dreams
Sometimes it seems
That I am still asleep

If this is all fake
I don't want to be awake
Please let me sleep forever

very nice, she must be a special girl.

rock on

There's a Dandy Warhol's song called "sleep" and it has a line "if i could sleep forever" in it. You should check it out.

Also, nice rhyme scheme; it's subtle and, therefore nice.

Very good! She must have touched your soul in a way you never thought possibe.

everyone does.

Pretty cool...Thanks

Very nice.
Embrace that feeling! :)

~Angel~

I LOVE YOU KYP!!!
You are and always will be the greatest guy in the entire world. Don't try to convince me otherwise because you will not win.

Wow. Very good! It flowed nicely, had a nice rhythym, and had a deep point. A hard combination to achieve. I loved it!