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Kyp 09-25-2003 01:20 AM

Let Me Sleep Forever
 
For the girl I should have seen so long ago, and my blindfold only recently came off.

Not matter how hard I try
I can't understand why
You are so good to me

How could it be
That you love me
I'm nobody in this world

You've given me so much
I love to feel your touch
And your lips taste so sweet

But I'll always be here
As I lose my fear
Of all I've never known

You gave me back my dreams
Sometimes it seems
That I am still asleep

If this is all fake
I don't want to be awake
Please let me sleep forever

maximus 09-26-2003 01:28 AM

very nice, she must be a special girl.

QuasiMojo 09-26-2003 09:15 PM

rock on

little limey 09-27-2003 09:22 PM

There's a Dandy Warhol's song called "sleep" and it has a line "if i could sleep forever" in it. You should check it out.

Also, nice rhyme scheme; it's subtle and, therefore nice.

ForgottenKnight 09-28-2003 09:05 AM

Very good! She must have touched your soul in a way you never thought possibe.

minyn 09-29-2003 07:58 PM

everyone does.

J.R.V.A. 09-30-2003 08:07 PM

Pretty cool...Thanks

Angel 10-01-2003 03:40 PM

Very nice.
Embrace that feeling! :)

~Angel~

Kyp's Girl 11-21-2003 11:50 PM

I LOVE YOU KYP!!!
You are and always will be the greatest guy in the entire world. Don't try to convince me otherwise because you will not win.

Amarth 11-22-2003 11:56 AM

Wow. Very good! It flowed nicely, had a nice rhythym, and had a deep point. A hard combination to achieve. I loved it!


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