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ForgottenKnight · 09-25-2003, 12:45 AM

With thanks to mirevolver for his contribution in the making of the following.

One Night

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Dear freinds,

I regret to inform you that my literature here has been removed for personal reasons. I wish for it to not be copied and published as someone else's work. I am thankful for all of the wonderful comments you have posted in response to my literature. I am extremely sorry about this, but I could see no other option.

Thank you for your kindness and understanding,

ForgottenKnight
Once known as NiceGuy

ForgottenKnight · 09-28-2003, 09:22 AM

Living in a Moment

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ForgottenKnight · 09-28-2003, 09:29 AM

The Void

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ForgottenKnight · 09-29-2003, 05:17 PM

Semi-Random thoughts about One Night at a Club

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ForgottenKnight · 09-29-2003, 05:28 PM

Semi-Random thoughts about a Moment.

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ForgottenKnight · 09-29-2003, 08:19 PM

Thoughts from a Long Day

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mirevolver · 09-29-2003, 08:34 PM

A very nice and detailed look into your mind. Perhaps you should start a journal.

ForgottenKnight · 09-30-2003, 02:01 AM

All I Offer

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J.R.V.A. · 09-30-2003, 08:49 PM

You have some good stuff here. I really enjoyed reading these, thank you very much for sharing.

ForgottenKnight · 10-01-2003, 12:50 AM

Thank you for reading my thoughts. I have now started a journal, and though it's not as elegant as my literature, please feel free read it.

Angel · 10-01-2003, 03:23 PM

Through your words, I have come to know some of you.
I hope you continue to post in here in addition to your journal.
Thanks for sharing.
~Angel~

ForgottenKnight · 10-01-2003, 08:13 PM

No One Knows

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ForgottenKnight · 10-01-2003, 10:01 PM

The Scare

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ForgottenKnight · 10-05-2003, 03:28 AM

During an hour drive I focused my thoughts into a short story. When I got back to my place, I tried remembering that story and writting it down. The following is what came out.

Forgotten

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10-05-2003, 04:22 AM

You have some real talent. You should consider some contests.

minyn · 10-05-2003, 10:00 AM

im sorry you feel that way. i really am

ForgottenKnight · 10-05-2003, 03:50 PM

The following are some semi-random thoughts I had a few days ago and have yet to share. They're not organized as literture, just as thoughts.

Help Me Now

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ForgottenKnight · 10-05-2003, 04:20 PM

The following are semi-random thoughts about my life. They are not organized to be literature. They're just my thoughts.

The Observer

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ForgottenKnight · 10-05-2003, 04:31 PM

The following are more semi-random thoughts, again not organized as literature, but just as thoughts.

The Pain

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minyn · 10-05-2003, 10:15 PM

I came with the hope of perhaps showing you another way to live. i did not come into this in hopes of setting you up to be hurt. You are something to me, but your expectations are trumping what this is. im not intending to fill your mind with illusions of possiblities that are dormant. they have to be. i wont walk away from what ive built other places. you once accepted that, im wondering if you still do. Friendship first. i'd say take it or leave it, but i dont want you to leave. just understand, accept. water off a duck's back.

with rule #1 comes the fine print of no expectations. thats how you get hurt.

chubber · 10-06-2003, 07:45 AM

hmnn not sure

ForgottenKnight · 10-06-2003, 10:26 AM

Thank you minyn for your words. They have clearified much. I did as you said last night and prayed, and I followed that with the reading of a small section of the Bible. Today when I awoke, all was clear in my mind. I sat down at work this morning and wrote down the philisophical idea that came to me. I'd share that now, but I don't have time to type it all up, so sharing it with the little segment of the world here at the tfp will have to wait until this evening.

ForgottenKnight · 10-06-2003, 10:53 AM

I lied... sorry... I barely had time to finish typing it before having to go... so now you don't have to wait to read it!

Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain.

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minyn · 10-06-2003, 05:11 PM

its official! i think something wonderful has been tapped in you. never knew an engineer can be such a wonderful and emotional writer. Theres a little artist in everyone?

ForgottenKnight · 10-06-2003, 07:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by minyn
its official! i think something wonderful has been tapped in you. never knew an engineer can be such a wonderful and emotional writer. Theres a little artist in everyone?

What can I say? Art runs in my family...
I'm a classical renaissance man.

ForgottenKnight · 10-06-2003, 09:42 PM

I have also posted my Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain text in a new thread on the Tilted Philosophy board to open it up for discussion. Please feel free to participate in the discussion.
http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...threadid=30461

minyn · 10-07-2003, 08:01 AM

What can I say? Art runs in my family...
I'm a classical renaissance man.

Does it? i would have never guessed with all the engineers running around!

minyn · 10-07-2003, 10:06 PM

nerds will rule the world, but artists will make it fun with them =)

ForgottenKnight · 10-08-2003, 06:18 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by minyn
nerds will rule the world, but artists will make it fun with them =)

Nerds rule the world, engineers build the world, politicians take all the credit, business people sell the world, and artists make the world a fun and beautiful place.

Stillborn · 10-08-2003, 12:10 PM

Wow, man! I never thought that I'd find someone else who felt about someone like I did! You wrote EXACTLY how I've felt about a girl for the past four months. Especially "No One Knows".

ForgottenKnight · 10-08-2003, 08:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Stillborn
Wow, man! I never thought that I'd find someone else who felt about someone like I did! You wrote EXACTLY how I've felt about a girl for the past four months. Especially "No One Knows".

But the one I feel this for is out of reach. She is a desire that I must put away, in accordance to my "Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain."

Stillborn · 10-09-2003, 06:47 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by NiceGuy
But the one I feel this for is out of reach. She is a desire that I must put away, in accordance to my "Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain."

As I've said, that's what I'm going through as well. That's how I feel.

ForgottenKnight · 10-13-2003, 09:20 PM

Sorry about the wait. I've been really busy lately, and I'm too busy for this as well, but I just had to write and post this collection of thoughts and feelings.

Have you fallen?

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Angel · 10-14-2003, 03:44 PM

This last one sure does tug on the memory strings!
Good work!

ForgottenKnight · 10-14-2003, 09:46 PM

In Candlelight

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minyn · 10-15-2003, 12:25 PM

life is but a dream, the question is always when you will awaken.

riptide4070 · 10-15-2003, 02:50 PM

"you left your mark inside my soul"

my favorite line, love is so sweet but damn if it doesn't hurt

ForgottenKnight · 10-20-2003, 11:05 PM

Will I Survive?

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minyn · 10-22-2003, 12:45 PM

You will survive. you have thusfar have you not?

mirevolver · 10-22-2003, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by minyn
You will survive. you have thusfar have you not?

Agreed

09-25-2003, 12:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	One Night (NiceGuy's Literature Thread) With thanks to mirevolver for his contribution in the making of the following. One Night < Removed > Dear freinds, I regret to inform you that my literature here has been removed for personal reasons. I wish for it to not be copied and published as someone else's work. I am thankful for all of the wonderful comments you have posted in response to my literature. I am extremely sorry about this, but I could see no other option. Thank you for your kindness and understanding, ForgottenKnight Once known as NiceGuy __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:38 PM..

09-28-2003, 09:22 AM	#2 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Living in a Moment < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:34 PM..

09-28-2003, 09:29 AM	#3 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	The Void < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:34 PM..

09-29-2003, 05:17 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Semi-Random thoughts about One Night at a Club < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:34 PM..

09-29-2003, 05:28 PM	#5 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Semi-Random thoughts about a Moment. < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:33 PM..

09-29-2003, 08:19 PM	#6 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Thoughts from a Long Day < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:33 PM..

09-29-2003, 08:34 PM	#7 (permalink)
mirevolver Inspired by the mind's eye. Location: Between the darkness and the light.	A very nice and detailed look into your mind. Perhaps you should start a journal. __________________ Aside from my great plans to become the future dictator of the moon, I have little interest in political discussions.

09-30-2003, 02:01 AM	#8 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	All I Offer < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:32 PM..

09-30-2003, 08:49 PM	#9 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	You have some good stuff here. I really enjoyed reading these, thank you very much for sharing. __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-01-2003, 12:50 AM	#10 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Thank you for reading my thoughts. I have now started a journal, and though it's not as elegant as my literature, please feel free read it. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-01-2003, 03:23 PM	#11 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Through your words, I have come to know some of you. I hope you continue to post in here in addition to your journal. Thanks for sharing. ~Angel~ __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-01-2003, 08:13 PM	#12 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	No One Knows < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:32 PM..

10-01-2003, 10:01 PM	#13 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	The Scare < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:32 PM..

10-05-2003, 03:28 AM	#14 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	During an hour drive I focused my thoughts into a short story. When I got back to my place, I tried remembering that story and writting it down. The following is what came out. Forgotten < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:31 PM..

10-05-2003, 04:22 AM	#15 (permalink)
2thumbsup Guest	You have some real talent. You should consider some contests.

10-05-2003, 10:00 AM	#16 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	im sorry you feel that way. i really am __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

10-06-2003, 07:45 AM	#21 (permalink)
chubber Upright Location: N W England	hmnn not sure

10-07-2003, 10:06 PM	#28 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	nerds will rule the world, but artists will make it fun with them =) __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

10-05-2003, 03:50 PM	#17 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	The following are some semi-random thoughts I had a few days ago and have yet to share. They're not organized as literture, just as thoughts. Help Me Now < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:30 PM..

10-05-2003, 04:20 PM	#18 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	The following are semi-random thoughts about my life. They are not organized to be literature. They're just my thoughts. The Observer < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:30 PM..

10-05-2003, 04:31 PM	#19 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	The following are more semi-random thoughts, again not organized as literature, but just as thoughts. The Pain < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:29 PM..

10-05-2003, 10:15 PM	#20 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	I came with the hope of perhaps showing you another way to live. i did not come into this in hopes of setting you up to be hurt. You are something to me, but your expectations are trumping what this is. im not intending to fill your mind with illusions of possiblities that are dormant. they have to be. i wont walk away from what ive built other places. you once accepted that, im wondering if you still do. Friendship first. i'd say take it or leave it, but i dont want you to leave. just understand, accept. water off a duck's back. with rule #1 comes the fine print of no expectations. thats how you get hurt. __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

10-06-2003, 10:26 AM	#22 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Thank you minyn for your words. They have clearified much. I did as you said last night and prayed, and I followed that with the reading of a small section of the Bible. Today when I awoke, all was clear in my mind. I sat down at work this morning and wrote down the philisophical idea that came to me. I'd share that now, but I don't have time to type it all up, so sharing it with the little segment of the world here at the tfp will have to wait until this evening. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-06-2003, 10:53 AM	#23 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I lied... sorry... I barely had time to finish typing it before having to go... so now you don't have to wait to read it! Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain. < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:29 PM..

10-06-2003, 05:11 PM	#24 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	its official! i think something wonderful has been tapped in you. never knew an engineer can be such a wonderful and emotional writer. Theres a little artist in everyone? __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

10-06-2003, 09:42 PM	#26 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I have also posted my Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain text in a new thread on the Tilted Philosophy board to open it up for discussion. Please feel free to participate in the discussion. http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...threadid=30461 __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-07-2003, 08:01 AM	#27 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	What can I say? Art runs in my family... I'm a classical renaissance man. Does it? i would have never guessed with all the engineers running around! __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

10-08-2003, 12:10 PM	#30 (permalink)
Stillborn Tilted Location: Dingden, DE / Centennial, CO	Wow, man! I never thought that I'd find someone else who felt about someone like I did! You wrote EXACTLY how I've felt about a girl for the past four months. Especially "No One Knows". __________________ Waiting... to be born again Wanting... the saddest kind of pain Waiting for the day when I will crawl away

10-13-2003, 09:20 PM	#33 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Sorry about the wait. I've been really busy lately, and I'm too busy for this as well, but I just had to write and post this collection of thoughts and feelings. Have you fallen? < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:28 PM..

10-14-2003, 03:44 PM	#34 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	This last one sure does tug on the memory strings! Good work! __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-14-2003, 09:46 PM	#35 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	In Candlelight < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:28 PM..

10-15-2003, 12:25 PM	#36 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	life is but a dream, the question is always when you will awaken. __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

10-15-2003, 02:50 PM	#37 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	"you left your mark inside my soul" my favorite line, love is so sweet but damn if it doesn't hurt __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

10-20-2003, 11:05 PM	#38 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Will I Survive? < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:27 PM..

10-22-2003, 12:45 PM	#39 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	You will survive. you have thusfar have you not? __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin