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Atropos4 · 04-25-2003, 06:09 PM

all of these are my small poems.....some I may yet incorperate into a larger one....

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1.

As I fall
people stare
I might die
but they don't care
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2.

You won't define
I fall behind
You cut the line
I must be blind
I wasted time

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3.

Mental Strain
Gone Insane
Scratch the Vein
Falls like Rain
Wrenching Pain
Soulless Drain
Eternal Stain
Hades Gain

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4.
Beyond the hill
and under the stream
rests a sparkling
mid summer dream

J.R.V.A. · 04-26-2003, 08:35 AM

Angel · 04-26-2003, 08:59 AM

You created a question within me...I wonder how many of us have a collection of these little pieces of work that we write as they hit us, some complete and others waiting for more.
Thank you for sharing these.

Esen · 09-09-2003, 02:24 PM

I like your little snippits, they may be small but the impact is large.

04-25-2003, 06:09 PM	#1 (permalink)
Atropos4 Think about it Location: North Carolina	My Small Poems all of these are my small poems.....some I may yet incorperate into a larger one.... ----------------------------- 1. As I fall people stare I might die but they don't care ----------------------------- 2. You won't define I fall behind You cut the line I must be blind I wasted time --------------------------- 3. Mental Strain Gone Insane Scratch the Vein Falls like Rain Wrenching Pain Soulless Drain Eternal Stain Hades Gain ---------------------------- 4. Beyond the hill and under the stream rests a sparkling mid summer dream __________________ Minds are like parachutes. They work better open. "If I were Hermione, I would have licked his pantleg."

04-26-2003, 08:35 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Cool __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

04-26-2003, 08:59 AM	#3 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	You created a question within me...I wonder how many of us have a collection of these little pieces of work that we write as they hit us, some complete and others waiting for more. Thank you for sharing these. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

09-09-2003, 02:24 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	I like your little snippits, they may be small but the impact is large. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?