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fallen_angel · 09-21-2003, 08:31 PM

Remember this moment
This here and now
How my hair fell upon my shoulders
How my eyes held yours, hypnotized
Remember my laughter and not my tears
Forget all my worries and never ending fears
My days were beautiful
Like flowers in bloom
Yet, my nights were unbareable
Without your strong careing arms
I'll always remember your smile
How you always try to help others
Dont think you failed with me
Just know and always remember
I cared for you dearly, but
My mind was not my own
Memories filled it to the breaking point
My past left no room for the present or future
I am free now, but I am always with you
So please remember me as I was
And not as I am now
Remember my laughter and playfulness
But most of all just
Remember Me. . .

chavos · 09-21-2003, 08:41 PM

*sigh....that brought me back to a love that has since wilted and gone away... but you did it so eloquently, that it hurts so good. thank you.

J.R.V.A. · 09-30-2003, 07:29 PM

Nice, I really enjoy reading you stuff, Thanks

ForgottenKnight · 10-01-2003, 09:40 PM

Very touching!

*Nikki* · 10-05-2003, 06:20 PM

You write a lot like me. I really enjoy your work.

Angel · 10-11-2003, 04:03 PM

I enjoyed this. You write with passion.
Thanks for sharing.
~Angel~

riptide4070 · 10-15-2003, 03:08 PM

angel said "you write with passion." chavos said "that hurt so good."

riptide says "my last and greatest love affects me deeply, your words help to express my then and now."

good stuff!

fallen_angel · 10-15-2003, 07:03 PM

As much as I apprieciate your words and thoughts, when I wrote this I wrote it as a farewell to a friend who has touched me greatly and whom I did not want to be sad about my passing.
Thankyou for reading and thankyou for making my days brighter

09-21-2003, 08:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Remember Me Remember this moment This here and now How my hair fell upon my shoulders How my eyes held yours, hypnotized Remember my laughter and not my tears Forget all my worries and never ending fears My days were beautiful Like flowers in bloom Yet, my nights were unbareable Without your strong careing arms I'll always remember your smile How you always try to help others Dont think you failed with me Just know and always remember I cared for you dearly, but My mind was not my own Memories filled it to the breaking point My past left no room for the present or future I am free now, but I am always with you So please remember me as I was And not as I am now Remember my laughter and playfulness But most of all just Remember Me. . . __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 10-13-2003 at 09:04 PM..

09-30-2003, 07:29 PM	#3 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Nice, I really enjoy reading you stuff, Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-01-2003, 09:40 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Very touching! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-11-2003, 04:03 PM	#6 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	I enjoyed this. You write with passion. Thanks for sharing. ~Angel~ __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-15-2003, 03:08 PM	#7 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	angel said "you write with passion." chavos said "that hurt so good." riptide says "my last and greatest love affects me deeply, your words help to express my then and now." good stuff! __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

09-21-2003, 08:41 PM	#2 (permalink)
chavos Banned Location: St. Paul, MN	*sigh....that brought me back to a love that has since wilted and gone away... but you did it so eloquently, that it hurts so good. thank you.

10-05-2003, 06:20 PM	#5 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	You write a lot like me. I really enjoy your work.

10-15-2003, 07:03 PM	#8 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	As much as I apprieciate your words and thoughts, when I wrote this I wrote it as a farewell to a friend who has touched me greatly and whom I did not want to be sad about my passing. Thankyou for reading and thankyou for making my days brighter __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel