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09-15-2003, 12:39 AM
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Crazy
Location: Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
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what?
go there
i was chasing that thought then it ran away something else dark came and took its place what do i do? hate? fear? forgive.. for what? the past haunts me, jaunts me, look, see, feel..... the pain i hurt, others, myself. hate is easier. not hate hate caused this hate cant fix this not hate? not hate. im confused. your confused? im confused! who is who? im him im the other him where did you come from? the same place you did we are the same? we are the same. help. help yourself. how the past, forget it i cant. do it or the present and the future will be your past. dont you see? i hurt, others and myself so? you hurt them cos you hurt them ok im gonna stop you cant stop it huh? you cant stop what never started what? what? dont do that. well. you stop it too dark. was good wasnt it. yes it was. time to stop now. but you said it never started. it didnt. then.... how? look behind, inside. lower. deeper. i see now. but do you SEE it. yes. the pain is not real.... cos the emotions that caused it arent real? correct. who are you. im you. we are the same? we are the same. thank you. thank you. |
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09-22-2003, 05:48 PM
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Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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WOW, dont know what to say but i actually kinda understood that. it also sounds alot familiar to something Eoywn_Vala read to me last night from her world lit. book. This is truely a masterpeice and everyone who read it and did not post is a morron not to notice that this is amazing. Thank you.
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel |
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09-29-2003, 06:39 PM
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young and in bloom
Location: under the bodhi tree.... *bling*
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Im so glad im not the only one who has those kind of moments.... the voices are fun friends i tell you!
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09-30-2003, 09:41 PM
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Jesus Freak
Location: Following the light...
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Very good work!
Yes, very good! I concure! The general sensus with all my voices seems to be that this is very good. Thanks for sharing from all of us voices in here.
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10-01-2003, 03:36 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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This almost gives the feel of an affair with another or oneselves other self....
I liked the impact and the emotion. ~Angel~
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 In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus |
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10-29-2003, 01:16 PM
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Addict
Location: Boone, NC
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I've had moments like that with myself. I never wrote down the conversations though. Your work was a look into the inner psyche, simply amazing!!!
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