07-30-2004, 06:37 AM | #41 (permalink) |
I change
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I think a new poem -
not because you stopped those apocalyptic downpours, tornadoes, even, and show a day of actual sunlight and clear sky. Hatched during your mean streak, the mosquitos are mid-summer strong. I was writing about that sky before you took it away from me for two too-long weeks. I was lying naked under your sun. And, as you know, I was looking good back then. I don’t think I trust you enough to get back out there now. Thanks, but I’ll just forget about how I look. Not only that - I was drawing again. My pen and paper suffused by sunlight, I drew up a storm...
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11-08-2004, 06:31 AM | #42 (permalink) |
I change
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whitetail
four million years moving through this hidden place it has always been yours but I share your secret now deep in your blood you know it by heart and your heart is my target you’re everywhere these barren days sex-crazed leaving traces on hard ground, on trees making mistakes showing yourself is your fatal flaw you’re giving yourself away and you don’t know that you can not help yourself I understand this behavior in my own flawed heart sensing me in your space I sense you in mine you’ll die here as will I one day but you are more beautiful than I this is why you will be the first to die
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11-09-2004, 12:12 AM | #45 (permalink) |
Drifting
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I love the juxaposition of that poem - even though we know certain paths will bring a faster end, we cannot break from the past.
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11-09-2004, 08:14 AM | #47 (permalink) |
I change
Location: USA
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running, bleeding
blood's flying out of you like a flock of red birds freed up from pressured spaces you're weakening now running for your life as life leaves you marking the trees with inner scent the dry woods soaked red leaf and root will grow anew warmed and fed by your pass your deer heart, unaware continues beating pumping out your life as if you are the world but you are not the world you are yourself and you are dying your bright tail signals surrender I'll make this up to you this beautiful murder you will continue on within me
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11-15-2004, 06:05 AM | #48 (permalink) |
I change
Location: USA
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building the blind
I use your eyes and think as you see the old place as new treading familiar pathways carefully leaving no trace no scent of my presence in our shared territory stepping back breathing it in observing the execution of your ancient habits comprehending the logic of your journeys and the reasons why you move finding your shapes pressed in the grass where your kind halts before stepping over the break in the rusted wire where you scrape the soft earth where you pass and have passed for millenia your prints still fresh the raw rubbed trees all the feral signs of your dangerous life you are drawn here by the fallen chestnuts the white oak acorns where the autumn sun warms the side of the southern hill where you hide at noon by the quenching waterway the cool places where I spot you beneath the moon the old paths converge here in this enfolding valley this is where I'm building the blind on the earthen dam above the small stream behind two trees I tie branches to brambles lay a cover of twigs drape brown grass level a spot when I return I'll sit for hours watch the frost evaporate admire the morning mist note the insistence of the woodpecker and wait for the flashing instant I end your numbered days this ineffable special place is not so unique each foot of living earth is after all a place for dying
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11-16-2004, 07:13 AM | #49 (permalink) |
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You know....I do not hunt.
But Damn....you just made it seem a rather inspired way to spend a weekend. Thanks
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12-19-2004, 11:46 PM | #50 (permalink) |
Oh dear God he breeded
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It's good to read more of your stuff Art. I need to keep an eye on this thread more often. You contunie to amaze and confuse, bedazale and enlighten. I really enjoyed the last one. It seems a rare thing for one to find such beauty in death. Though is it the hunter following the dear, or the bear following the hunter? Hum, something to ponder. Keep them comeing man. It's like intullectual porn for a metiphor junkie.
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12-24-2004, 09:45 PM | #51 (permalink) |
I change
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Thanks for the kind words, Seer666.
Every once in a while, I like to use words more carefully than I typically do. Glad these have some value to you. They're like stepping stones along a clear path for me. So much of our experience is verbal - including our thinking. I occasionally have a need to create some clarity out of the clutter, I suppose.
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01-24-2005, 08:29 AM | #53 (permalink) |
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Ghostly World
If spirits do roam In these spaces Between the slow burning up of suns And the inexorable downward slide of gravity It must look this way to them. Where the appearance of death is brilliant And things freeze white in solid air The escape of steam from nostrils Mistaken for the soul Turns things strange Like getting gasoline Out under orange and yellow bays Great bright stalls on greasy concrete The living dead stand still Fueling up, driven to wander Risking everything to get back home The signs surround me They are quite beautiful But I know, in my marrow They are all about dying I’m not going out there They’re spreading rumors About spring - even rebirth But that’s a matter of faith
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01-24-2005, 09:26 AM | #54 (permalink) |
Drifting
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Wow, I had to read this a couple times to make sure I was grasping the poem, and it always is good to think about how others view our world.
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna |
02-04-2005, 01:56 PM | #56 (permalink) |
I change
Location: USA
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My Heart Attack
There’s a man I’ve yet to meet He lives over at the next farm Been there just about forever, they say I see him, dressed darkly, sitting on his tractor He can raise a thousand acres of corn with that thing And he can cut them right down again Staring only at his wheels When we moved in here I waved the first few times he passed He never even turned his head So I stopped waving He’s a decorated veteran – a war hero The subject of a Hollywood movie These days though, he walks slowly Out to the mailbox and back The other day I passed him in my truck He seemed to pause at that very moment Stared in my direction I almost waved at him But he wasn’t looking at me He had just mailed a letter Maybe he was having second thoughts I think he knows the weight of his words I keep thinking I should go over there Make his acquaintance He’s knows my family He’s visited my friends One day He may come To visit me
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02-12-2005, 12:54 PM | #57 (permalink) |
I change
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here she comes
Setting up for spring around here. The flying wedges of geese point due north these days. There’s the occasional seagulls resting up in superstore parking lots. A few farmers are getting the jump on things by turning over newly thawed fields. And there’s little bulging buds on bare tree limbs. The sky is lit by a higher warmer sun. Clouds puff up after descending from their high striations. Our road is a collection of muddy ruts swamped by thawing snowbanks. Most of last year’s gravel’s been scraped away by the plows of winter. Got on my lighter jacket. Sus is wearin’ her fringe buckskin. Mimi’s in her lightweight western fleece. I’m writing fair weather poems and sus is out on the sunporch painting the landscape. Yep. Winter’s windin’ down. Don’t matter what else is up its sleeve. We been through another year’s low down ride. And the tide’s on it’s way in ag’in.
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02-15-2005, 06:57 AM | #59 (permalink) | |
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02-20-2005, 06:59 AM | #61 (permalink) |
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My Heart Attack II
I saw him today turning under corn shafts he left over winter for deer cover. I had dinner put out the dogs and he was still there. All I see now is the tree of lights suspended from his tractor the beams shooting out toward grey rows. Standing against the slow advance of his inevitable machine stalks become sound under invisible wheels and the February moon. He’s still out there. By morning the old crop will be gone.
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02-20-2005, 07:43 AM | #62 (permalink) |
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Damn Art....always a pleasure to read you.
Standing against the slow advance of his inevitable machine stalks become sound under invisible wheels and the February moon. this was particularly well done. thanx
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04-10-2005, 07:37 PM | #65 (permalink) |
Fade out
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ART, i enjoyed that. Spring is certainly a time of renewal.
Your words conveyed the rays of sun with a graphic feeling. very nice.
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04-11-2005, 04:46 PM | #67 (permalink) |
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Coming from one already sunburned, that spring pull is just too strong to ignore - seems like we become naked in soul and spirit as well, to the changes in our lives that lie ahead.
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04-17-2005, 09:53 PM | #71 (permalink) |
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Location: A warm room
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So wonderful. Perhaps one day, when I am not so full of sleep, I will tear these apart and see what falls out.
Some of my favorite lines: Isabel Gone You were a murderess too Bittersweet in my hand This orange Monarch Died young Getting rough out here. The cicadas of late summer are silent. Their crisp skins, strewn around mixed with acorns, lifeless leaves. ^ when I was a child, I'd go around the neighbourhood in late August collecting the remains of the cicadas. I liked to think that they were fairy shells, despite how ugly some of the skins can be. Fault for the Fall How do you expect us to act With such a wicked Mother? What a perfect way to end. I love the connection that this poem, especially, makes between humanity and nature. Your poems make me want to go walking. They're serene and thoughtful, hopeful and honest. Some of the best I have read all year.
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04-26-2005, 05:45 AM | #73 (permalink) | |
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04-29-2005, 04:07 PM | #74 (permalink) |
I change
Location: USA
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dressing you with my eyes
I've been watching you very closely for more than a month. You're always up before me. In fact, as far as I know, You're always up. You're there when I awake making yourself more lovely right in front of me. You do it so slowly. I can't stare away. New tones of green cover your limbs. Your body disappears like the landforms behind a peacock's tail. Then suddenly you're adorning yourself with cherry, lilac, and forsythia. I can hardly bear these differences between us. You are the most beautiful thing. Even I can see that.
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05-12-2005, 12:19 PM | #77 (permalink) |
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I could have been blue
I could have been you On that walnut limb At the center of the world. I want you to wait For my camera I want your image And to speak your name As if by saying, “Indigo Bunting” I could become you And now with camera in hand I look at empty air Above the branch Where you were Beyond the grey-brown perch Behind the green leaves The sky is bluer now From having held you
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