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fallen_angel 09-12-2003 10:55 AM

Searching For
 
The sand of time slowly drains
Leaving chafe upon the wind
But in this moment
Time stands still
Tonight its you and I together
Your kiss, your smile
I would die for, like
The way I lost my heart to you that day
For destiny had decided
I should look your direction
For I have looked for a lifetime
And loved for a day
I never knew I was lost
Until you found me
I may not hear music looking in your eyes
But I feel the rhythm of your body close to mine
And when I look in your eyes
I know now what I had been searching for

sorry had to change some spelling errors

J.R.V.A. 09-12-2003 10:58 AM

Swwweeeeeeettttttttttttt!!!!!!
I really like this part..
I may not hear music looking in your eyes
But I feel the rhythm of your body close to mine

Eowyn_Vala 09-16-2003 09:41 AM

Wow, now if only I can figure out who you are talking about!
Just Kidding!
I really like this. It is very sweet but not overly sugary sweet! You say everything so simply that it makes it that much more moving.

"But in this moment
Time stands still
Tonight its you and I together"

that is my favorite part!


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