Love from Death Eternal - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

Eowyn_Vala · 09-09-2003, 06:33 PM

be but death to mine own eyes
and I shall away at once
For who wouldst love
what once that doth have warmth
be now cold and like stone?
tears of mine will fall for
what becometh our love
'til time of end shall I mourn
ever shall I walk at night
in search of thy soul
living death will haunt me
as I long for your embrace
and whilst I bequeath mine own
kiss of death in search of you
be it known my love
for you doth not end with
death but lives eternal
in dark, as deep crimson red

chavos · 09-09-2003, 07:25 PM

moody and dark-i like the atypical language use-it's apropos to the subject, and sounds authentic coming from you. thanks for the great read!

J.R.V.A. · 09-10-2003, 12:12 PM

kiss of death in search of you
Great line, thanks

fallen_angel · 09-13-2003, 03:04 PM

very well said, i enjoyed reading this. you have a way with words that astounds me daily. I wish i could write like you but as we all know, to each his own.

Eowyn_Vala · 09-23-2003, 09:48 AM

thank you everyone for your kind comments!

it is darker than what I normally write, but it felt good to write it! i don't know if i will write much more on the darker side, it all depends! this is probably one of my favorites that I have written, normally i don't have favorites!

09-09-2003, 06:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	Love from Death Eternal be but death to mine own eyes and I shall away at once For who wouldst love what once that doth have warmth be now cold and like stone? tears of mine will fall for what becometh our love 'til time of end shall I mourn ever shall I walk at night in search of thy soul living death will haunt me as I long for your embrace and whilst I bequeath mine own kiss of death in search of you be it known my love for you doth not end with death but lives eternal in dark, as deep crimson red __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

09-10-2003, 12:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	kiss of death in search of you Great line, thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

09-13-2003, 03:04 PM	#4 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	very well said, i enjoyed reading this. you have a way with words that astounds me daily. I wish i could write like you but as we all know, to each his own. __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

09-23-2003, 09:48 AM	#5 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	thank you everyone for your kind comments! it is darker than what I normally write, but it felt good to write it! i don't know if i will write much more on the darker side, it all depends! this is probably one of my favorites that I have written, normally i don't have favorites! __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

09-09-2003, 07:25 PM	#2 (permalink)
chavos Banned Location: St. Paul, MN	moody and dark-i like the atypical language use-it's apropos to the subject, and sounds authentic coming from you. thanks for the great read!