A. Rothschild

I was inspired by different recent happenings in my life, that made me write this. evertything in () is to be sung with a raspy whisper. It's written as progressive metal and I'm going to see if a friend of mine can make some music for it.

Armand Rothschild - Over the stars

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we are still young and lost
I look at you and watch you turn to dust
your angelic face is getting lost deep in my mind
this life has become a cruel reality
we're drifing away from eachother and this world

This empty space is what we've made
(there is no escape)
this twisted world is all that is left
(there is no escape)
now there is no way to run anymore
(there is no escape)
just close your eyes and float away

I took the ride over the stars
my mind got torn into pieces
this love couldn't save me anymore
I drift around and watch the earth fade beneath
I can't come back while you're around

This empty space is what we've made
(there is no escape)
this twisted world is all that is left
(there is no escape)
now there is no way to run anymore
(there is no escape)
just close your eyes and float away

this trip is suddenly perpetual
I never would have known it could be like this
I see all my life from above
and I see your sorrow and pain
It pleases me to see you battered and empty

-female-
why did you have to take it over the stars
(you thought life was so easy on me)
it could have been allright
(you thought all I saw was beauty)
never I wanted to hurt you
(you thought all I wanted was life)
-female end-

This empty space is what we've made
(there is no escape)
this twisted world is all that is left
(there is no escape)
now there is no way to run anymore
(there is no escape)
just close your eyes and float away

now just follow me away
together we'll try something new
we'll take it over the stars
and the rest of the world is gone for us
we have our own universe

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J.R.V.A.

Nice song, Evanessence maybe ? I could just hear them singing it.

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

Eowyn_Vala

okay that is a great song and the strangest thing was that when i was reading it Evanescence came on the radio

i was thinking it sounded like something they would sing when the song came on too and since i love Evanescence, it would only make sense that i love the lyrics to your song!

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A. Rothschild

Hmm... acctually I don't really like Evanesence... Especially because of the male singer that breaks in and makes it all sound like Linkin Park(!) *screams* I was more thinking some slow electroninc metal/progressive metal. I was listening to The Kovenant while I was writing it... Thanks for your replies anyway.

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J.R.V.A.

Yea, thats it... I really think this will make a great song. Can't wait to hear it

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

Minx

I like it! Would love to hear it IRL!

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-Anders

I can hear this song, i would think the chorus would go somewhat faster than the rest of it tho.. I don't know, i'm not much of a musical genius, hehe.

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Stillborn

Sounds like it could be better as a Decoryah song than a Kovenant song, in my opinion. And (fortunately) that Evanescence song is the only one with that dickhead in it. The rest of that CD's pretty good.

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Waiting... to be born again

Wanting... the saddest kind of pain
Waiting for the day when I will crawl away