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Old 09-02-2003, 07:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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More pathetic garbage from yours truely

You're not there
but I am here
missing you
You might not be
thinking of me.
But I am, missing you
You maybe fixing pops
or listening to some soft rock
but I am missing you
I don't have class
I can be a pain in the ass
but I am missing you
Annoying and plain
and definitially lame.
I am missing you.
You are so smart,
and so damn cute,
I am missing you.
Your smile makes me melt,
I just want to be felt.
I am missing you.
I'm not so bright and a little uptight,
but I am missing you.
the point to this poem?
It's obvious;
I am missing you.
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Old 09-02-2003, 07:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Yeaaaaaa I really really like this.... Thank you... Not garbage at all, very good
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Old 09-04-2003, 01:49 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: Up yonder
Okay don't take this the wrong way at all but damn - that's sweet!
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