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Goomba 09-02-2003 04:54 PM

Angel
 
Depressed, nose-bleed, crossed eyes
staring down on me
crushed lips, finger tips
brings me back
drugged persona, mix amonia
take a swallow of heaven
lie back, cigarette
dream of touching a cloud
stolen sunshine, razer blade
plundge in and watch it fade
scream out toxic waste
melt a mold to paste
fallen angel, death by dutch
sweep up the feathers
and watch them blow away

Sing out a being of light, of love
a one winged angel of lust
parted by passion and sweat
of blood and of tears
tear away your pain
hold close to a razer blade
sleep during the day
a fallen angel on it's way
following the light of the night
moon lit, with death in sight
crying out confessions of blood
walls tainted, fainted
in a heap of feathers

J.R.V.A. 09-02-2003 06:24 PM

Nice work, thanks

Eowyn_Vala 09-03-2003 05:29 PM

there are no words to describe the emotion this piece conveys to me except that it is great

fallen_angel 09-03-2003 05:33 PM

In my heart lies an image of a fallen angel, I must admit that this is somewhat opposite to my vision, but i must admit also, that this is equal to mine in many ways. thank you for expressing in words i would never have found.


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