08-27-2003, 09:11 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Insane
Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin
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Inside My Heart
There is a secret place
Where dragons used to roam Fire swamps and acid rain And buzzards called it home This secret place of darkness With its troubled sky Where dreams were always fading And hope would always die I laid upon a field of glass Shattered through my skin Agonized with my own loathe And unabounding sin A light once shone down through the clouds I turned my face away I feared the change mayhap would come With the light of day And yet it shone upon me bright Warm to my very core And though it felt so good and right I'd felt such things before So I turned again on you Buried myself in earth Until a day I could embrace Our love's holy rebirth And now I rise, my wings unfurled Naked as the day That I might hold you in my arms And forever with you lay.
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09-03-2003, 02:10 PM | #3 (permalink) |
TFPer formaly known as Chauncey
Location: North East
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I'm usualy not into straight form Poetry,
but your poem is really beutiful. ( i know i spelled it wrong) Yuk I'm a guy I shouln't be saying beutiful Anyhow I really liked it
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09-03-2003, 05:20 PM | #4 (permalink) |
Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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*sniff* i really like this poem and i can't explain why
it's finding your way after it seemed like you might lose it
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09-03-2003, 05:24 PM | #5 (permalink) |
Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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I agree with Chauncey, this is a beautifully crafted masterpeice. Thank you
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel |
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