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Old 08-23-2003, 11:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin
Heart of Trouble

My love
You are so strong
So strong in my weakness
Able to carry me when I fall
Kissing my tears away
Forgiving me of my weakness
Forgiving me of my strength.
I am weak
So very, very weak.
But my love
I am trying.
I am trying so hard.
And every tiny victory
Comes with so much pain
And every tiny failure
Comes with so much pain
And every tiny thing
Is met with my silence.

I am victorious today.
And yet there is no jubilance
For I defeated only myself.
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Old 08-24-2003, 04:16 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Very goog, I really like this part
"And every tiny victory
Comes with so much pain
And every tiny failure
Comes with so much pain"
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her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
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