Harnessed
 

Harnessed

The flesh of strained desire sweats and expands
forever curling over the shivers of my own skin.

Ripping the lining of perfection and developing the little carresses that used to hide in the back of my mind.

now named, they control the heat that echoes fluidly haphazardly engulfing me
always breaking your trance
seamless envelopes of lies broken open and disregarding the true language of your hunger. It ravishes me
filters me
makes an ever surveying harness of exstacy that breaks down and cries within the fumes of your own wicked scent
engulfing me
tiing me

singing soft whispers or reluctance just loud enough to make all who breath tremble

Bleed my innocense, sift all the tangieble blowing gusts of rememberence from myeyes and make me see the true mount of your hair.

sickening , to make us strong a true mold of inner perfection

Hear, stop, listen.

rocking forth falling forward bundles of pores opening into buckets of heat.
The linens of the bed scratch desperatly to hold us tight fondling my desires to push myself all the way in ,

the true sin, two bodies now confused buckling within each other.
the true trap of the orgasm.
The harness sea that holds you us and me.

~Chauncey AKA ECL 8/18/03

The flesh of strained desire sweats and expands
forever curling over the shivers of my own skin.

owwwwwwwwww that is killer. I like your writings thanks

Thanks a lot J.R.V.A

I really like your writing as well.

wow. . . umm. . . I lOVED IT. . . of course though when i finished reading this i want only to jump the next guy that passes by the door. . . truely erotic. . . thank you I very much enjoyed

I'll be honest: it's very hard for me to like free verse this...free. I like a little structure, you know? However, certain lines caught my attention:

"Bleed my innocense" - this metaphor works so well...it makes me think of so much blood coming from stigmata marks in someone's body

"Singing soft whispers [of] reluctance just loud enough to make all who breathe tremble" - wow. Just...awe inspiring. I read it twice, the second time all in one breath, out loud...and it just sounds so surreal, so anxious, so ready to just burst out into oblivion. I love it!