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SnotGoblin 08-18-2003 08:06 AM

Just another poem
 
Nothing special...just sharing thoughts. :)

I sit,
and I crouch,
as I look to the west.
Wondering,
and thinking,
of what to do next.

I sit by myself,
as I ponder,
this again.
Where am I at?
Where did this begin?

Look to the stars,
for their guidance,
and their aid.
Asking my mind,
if I can be saved.

The car is smoking,
and I don't know why.
I sense,
and I think,
that today I might die.

She's laying,
in her dress,
that is covered in blood.
I wonder,
if their,
is really a God above.

Then,
if she dies,
then I should go too.
I can't,
stay here,
I won't ever have a clue.

Esen 08-21-2003 02:32 PM

Very Dark , I love that !
Heh Heh,
Its original to you, but has a great Jim Morrison flavor to it.
Which is really cool

J.R.V.A. 08-21-2003 07:33 PM

Very good. Sounds like you were there

SnotGoblin 08-25-2003 04:05 AM

Thanks guys!!! :)


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