my latest effort
 

i was kinda depressed over a girl the other day... started making up a song...

I'm lonely,
No-one is around.
I'm shouting,
But I don't make a sound.
I'm crying,
The tears run down my face.
Won't somebody,
Come take my place?

I need you,
more than you need me.
I need you,
More than you can see.
I need you, I need you
I need you.
You're the one who can set me free.
You're the one who has got the key.
You're the one who will get me free,
From my cage of feelings

I'm standing,
On my own again.
I'm thinking,
I'll never see you again.
I'm acting,
Like everything's fine.
I'm knowing,
You'll never be mine

I need you,
more than you need me.
I need you,
More than you can see.
I need you, I need you
I need you.
You're the one who can set me free.
You're the one who has got the key.
You're the one who can rescue me,
From my cage of feelings

it's not finished yet, but you get the idea. comments?

nice start, hope to read the finished version, gl.

thanks :) i'm gonna see if my mate's band want to use the lyrics

SOunds like a good song

Very sincere.

I like it (cuz it rhymes!). Now if only there were guitar tabs to it :)

ps: i don't play guitar really well, but i can read tabs enough to play a song