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Esen	08-04-2003 03:58 PM

an open can

In the living of my room
I open up
Popping fizzing
the cans are eternally insync
listening gurgling
foaming
Twisted and scented tearing not needing
all the courseness taken away from your thirst
empty crushed
recycled rinse
repeat

J.R.V.A.

08-04-2003 05:46 PM

In the living of my room... I really like this, thank you for sharing it

Esen	08-05-2003 04:45 PM

thank you,

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