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Spinach_Indeed · 07-29-2003, 02:30 PM

Dammit. This isn't even a poetry. I'm not even going to bother fixing the spelling. Arghh.

Sitting Alone.
Semen Dribbiling down my leg. Cigerrate making my nose itch.
Is this what life Is supposed to be like?
Shouldn't there be more?
But..this is beautiful, isn't it?

I hate it
I loathe it
But don't I love it?
Isn't this beautiful?

I have always told myself
That It could all be beautiful
You were beauty
as was I

Was it just a loophole?
Was it something I invented?
How could it all be perfect?
How could everything be disguistingly beautiful?

If I can see the beauty in rape and murder
Than Surely this must be beautiful.
It has to be.

J.R.V.A. · 07-29-2003, 08:26 PM

Much power. The first to lines made me laugh, the repulsed at the last three. Yes, this is poetry, and you got two emotions out of me in one poem. Thanks

Spinach_Indeed · 07-30-2003, 10:25 AM

Wow. Thanks. I was in a bad mood when I wrote and posted it. So I was beating myself up for even writing it, denouncing it as poetry and what not.

Now I'm in a slightly better mood. I've got Ice Cream!

little limey · 07-30-2003, 12:46 PM

as usual, you underestimate yourself.

JohnS72 · 07-30-2003, 01:14 PM

I love it, haha- It's interesting for sure.

Spinach_Indeed · 07-30-2003, 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by little limey
as usual, you underestimate yourself.

I think I want to marry you.
I know I do.

little limey · 07-31-2003, 06:13 AM

[smile]

07-29-2003, 02:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
Spinach_Indeed Banned? Location: Artic Tundra	This is NOT Beautiful Dammit. This isn't even a poetry. I'm not even going to bother fixing the spelling. Arghh. Sitting Alone. Semen Dribbiling down my leg. Cigerrate making my nose itch. Is this what life Is supposed to be like? Shouldn't there be more? But..this is beautiful, isn't it? I hate it I loathe it But don't I love it? Isn't this beautiful? I have always told myself That It could all be beautiful You were beauty as was I Was it just a loophole? Was it something I invented? How could it all be perfect? How could everything be disguistingly beautiful? If I can see the beauty in rape and murder Than Surely this must be beautiful. It has to be. __________________ Spinach in Need is Spinach Indeed

07-29-2003, 08:26 PM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Much power. The first to lines made me laugh, the repulsed at the last three. Yes, this is poetry, and you got two emotions out of me in one poem. Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

07-30-2003, 10:25 AM	#3 (permalink)
Spinach_Indeed Banned? Location: Artic Tundra	Wow. Thanks. I was in a bad mood when I wrote and posted it. So I was beating myself up for even writing it, denouncing it as poetry and what not. Now I'm in a slightly better mood. I've got Ice Cream! __________________ Spinach in Need is Spinach Indeed

07-30-2003, 12:46 PM	#4 (permalink)
little limey Psycho Location: Room Nineteen	as usual, you underestimate yourself.

07-30-2003, 01:14 PM	#5 (permalink)
JohnS72 Crazy	I love it, haha- It's interesting for sure.

07-31-2003, 06:13 AM	#7 (permalink)
little limey Psycho Location: Room Nineteen	[smile]