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Halx · 04-22-2003, 10:52 PM

i drift through life
through doors
through light
as mists would; without heed
but you see me
through waves
through screen
as solid; and i'm freed

and somehow true
cant touch
cant love
as fate has; teased our mind
but bonds like force
cant break
cant move
as solid; as you'll find

*Nikki* · 04-23-2003, 04:32 PM

I see what lies in your heart

ARTelevision · 04-23-2003, 05:29 PM

I'm with you, man - from the title (which is tres apropos)
to the last line.
Thanks.

phoenix1002 · 04-23-2003, 08:27 PM

The first few lines especially strike deep for me. Thanks for sharing that with us.

Angel · 04-24-2003, 03:01 AM

I can't find the words to express how understood this is. So I will leave it at that...understood.
Thank you~

04-22-2003, 10:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
Halx Please touch this. Owner/Admin Location: Manhattan	persevere i drift through life through doors through light as mists would; without heed but you see me through waves through screen as solid; and i'm freed and somehow true cant touch cant love as fate has; teased our mind but bonds like force cant break cant move as solid; as you'll find __________________ You have found this post informative. -The Administrator [Don't Feed The Animals]

04-23-2003, 05:29 PM	#3 (permalink)
ARTelevision I change Location: USA	I'm with you, man - from the title (which is tres apropos) to the last line. Thanks. __________________ create evolution

04-23-2003, 08:27 PM	#4 (permalink)
phoenix1002 Psycho Location: lost	The first few lines especially strike deep for me. Thanks for sharing that with us. __________________ I'd rather be climbing... I approach college much like a recovering alcoholic--one day at a time...

04-24-2003, 03:01 AM	#5 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	I can't find the words to express how understood this is. So I will leave it at that...understood. Thank you~ __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

04-23-2003, 04:32 PM	#2 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	I see what lies in your heart