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Old 07-23-2003, 10:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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my poetry(more to come)

To Fly

Picturing looking into the sky
Having to say goodbye
Trying desperately not to cry

I am on my back
But I am looking up
Looking up so high
Wanting so badly
To feel the wind in my face
As I soar through the sky
Wanting so badly to fly

But on the ground is where I am
Lying on my back
Dreaming of the sky
Dreaming of loosing myself in your eyes
Wanting so badly to fly

I close my lids
To escape from this place
To leave my face
To become something new
To transcend my form
To leave this shell
To escape this hell
To be one with the birds
To be able to soar away from the herds
But I am lying, looking, longing the sky
Wanting so badly to fly
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Old 07-23-2003, 10:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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One Day

One day I will hold you in my arms
Loving you caring for you
Never letting you see any harm

One day I will lift you up so high
Your feet will hold the ground in contempt
And my soul shall fly higher than the sky

One day all my dreams will come true
With you in my life
My heart will never feel blue

One day my life will be complete
With you as my mate
I could accomplish astonishing feats

One day I will be whole
With you by my side
I will have a completed soul

One day I will show you my love
Giving you something cherishable
Something as symbolic as a dove

One day I will grow old
Gambling throughout life
But the hand I hold with you I shall never fold
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Old 07-24-2003, 06:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I get just what you were saying in To fly. very nice
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Old 07-24-2003, 06:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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great peoms, are they about somebody in particular or just thoughts?
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Old 07-24-2003, 07:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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most of my poems are written for different girls I have dated in the past but they are more for me than the girls and after reading them I have realized the cirlces I go in and I am currently working on getting out of them, Ill post a few more tonight
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Old 07-24-2003, 09:25 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Very nice!
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Old 07-25-2003, 12:42 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Unconditional

Recently every step you take
is a step you make
away from me

I am still standing arms open
tired of looking at your back

Debating over choices
that come from these voices
deep inside my head

Do I stand in this place
longing for your face
untill you walk over the horizon

Should I run after you
with all my heart and strength

Or is the solution
to turn around and ignore your pollution
and try to take a step for myself

Will any of these choices
silent these voices
from within my head

The answer is not clear
I can't help but to feel this fear

How long can I wait
how many steps will you take
I will be standing here arms open
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Old 07-25-2003, 12:45 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Smile

As this day flows by
as methodic as the rest

My mind starts to wonder
fancying ideas of whats to unfold

Will my dreams come true
I hope atleast the ones that envolve you
will be granted to me
no matter what the fee

Reflecting on past mistakes
wondering if they will be remade

Now contemplating if they were actually mistakes
or if it was just simply fate

That pushed them away

I can't stand the wait to see
if these feelings were meant to be

Hoping you will come around
and realize the leaps and bounds
that I would make just to see
you smiling back at me
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Old 07-25-2003, 12:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Friend?

Several days feel like years
I start to question the word friend
then I see all my fears

A drop of water falls to the ground

Never before have I had such mixed feelings
for a soul who at one time completed my day
when I first glanced her way

Someone who makes me smile
during my darkest moments

I wish she could see
how I feel for her
what I want from her
what I can give her

Why won't she put one ounce of effort
into a crumbling friendship

Why isn't she there
when I need her most

What I expect
I guess was to much

To much to ask of her

Why won't she give me a shoulder
as I have for her

Does she see the pain and sorrow
I feel

Does she care?
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Old 07-27-2003, 06:52 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Very nice work! I particularly like Unconditional...it reaches out. I will look forward to seeing more of your writings.
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