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07-29-2003, 02:30 PM
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Banned?
Location: Artic Tundra
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This is NOT Beautiful
Dammit. This isn't even a poetry. I'm not even going to bother fixing the spelling. Arghh.
Sitting Alone. Semen Dribbiling down my leg. Cigerrate making my nose itch. Is this what life Is supposed to be like? Shouldn't there be more? But..this is beautiful, isn't it? I hate it I loathe it But don't I love it? Isn't this beautiful? I have always told myself That It could all be beautiful You were beauty as was I Was it just a loophole? Was it something I invented? How could it all be perfect? How could everything be disguistingly beautiful? If I can see the beauty in rape and murder Than Surely this must be beautiful. It has to be.
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07-29-2003, 08:26 PM
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Location: Utah
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Much power. The first to lines made me laugh, the repulsed at the last three. Yes, this is poetry, and you got two emotions out of me in one poem. Thanks
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07-30-2003, 10:25 AM
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Location: Artic Tundra
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Wow. Thanks. I was in a bad mood when I wrote and posted it. So I was beating myself up for even writing it, denouncing it as poetry and what not.
Now I'm in a slightly better mood. I've got Ice Cream!
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