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a_divine_martyr · 07-22-2003, 09:45 PM

Darkness thins to the silver living.
Eradicating the deepest of the vexed.
Shadows grow long, hiding faces of the burnt.
In the distance the heat rises.
Then silence.
The world grows cold.

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I still need a title if anyone thinks of one.

J.R.V.A. · 07-23-2003, 05:19 AM

Gray matter....
I read this and all I could think was gray matter.
Very good poem, thanks

Eowyn_Vala · 07-23-2003, 02:24 PM

Hmmm... I can't think of a title, but I really enjoyed reading it and pondering over it.

Angel · 07-23-2003, 04:41 PM

You give such depth in so few words. You still work your magic and I am glad you are still sharing it here. It has been a while for me.
As far as the title...it will come to you, it is yours.

07-22-2003, 09:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
a_divine_martyr Insane	>>untitled for now<< Darkness thins to the silver living. Eradicating the deepest of the vexed. Shadows grow long, hiding faces of the burnt. In the distance the heat rises. Then silence. The world grows cold. ..... I still need a title if anyone thinks of one. __________________ Censorship and thought control can only exist in secrecy and darkness...

07-23-2003, 05:19 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Gray matter.... I read this and all I could think was gray matter. Very good poem, thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

07-23-2003, 02:24 PM	#3 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	Hmmm... I can't think of a title, but I really enjoyed reading it and pondering over it. __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

07-23-2003, 04:41 PM	#4 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	You give such depth in so few words. You still work your magic and I am glad you are still sharing it here. It has been a while for me. As far as the title...it will come to you, it is yours. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus