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07-22-2003, 12:50 AM
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You + Me = Us
Location: California dreaming...
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My feelings for you
Gazing lovingly into your eyes
Ignoring the hate staring back Wondering if things will ever be the same While knowing, at the same time, that they wont Wishing for a better day Hoping for a better tomarrow Moving for a better future One with me and you And us, together |
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07-22-2003, 12:01 PM
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Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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thats beautiful, and the fact that you still care so deeply to look past the hatred tells a lot about your character. thanx for sharing
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel |
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07-23-2003, 02:28 PM
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Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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My one thought was "if only", I don't know why. I really liked it and wish you the best of luck. I guess the ''if only" was in reference to the part about being together in the future. If the person hates you it will take a lot to break down that hate. Then again if your love is strong enough and if they love you enough to forget their hate, then the future isn't "if only."
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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it |
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07-23-2003, 04:38 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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There is nothing more painful than seeing hate reflecting in the one you loves eyes. Yet you manage to portray hope for tomorrow. Nice work.
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 In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus |
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07-25-2003, 12:56 AM
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You + Me = Us
Location: California dreaming...
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I think I'm over her, but theres this new girl. Well, I'm not good at explaining these things, just read on:
I think I'm in love with this girl The way she smiles and how just one word One single word, effortlessly tossed into the air Is enough to make the day, night, afternoon.. Brighter, better, fantastic Her beauty, I tell you It almost inexplicable Her hips swaying, gently left, gently right Enticing, but almost too graceful to touch Left, right, left, right Her smile, her laugh, the way she blushes They're signs, like everything's going to be ok It's more than just hope now, it's like a fact And I'm believing Man, I think I'm in love with this girl. |
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