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numberfive 07-22-2003 12:50 AM

My feelings for you
 
Gazing lovingly into your eyes
Ignoring the hate staring back
Wondering if things will ever be the same
While knowing, at the same time, that they wont
Wishing for a better day
Hoping for a better tomarrow
Moving for a better future
One with me and you
And us, together

fallen_angel 07-22-2003 12:01 PM

thats beautiful, and the fact that you still care so deeply to look past the hatred tells a lot about your character. thanx for sharing

Eowyn_Vala 07-23-2003 02:28 PM

My one thought was "if only", I don't know why. I really liked it and wish you the best of luck. I guess the ''if only" was in reference to the part about being together in the future. If the person hates you it will take a lot to break down that hate. Then again if your love is strong enough and if they love you enough to forget their hate, then the future isn't "if only."

Angel 07-23-2003 04:38 PM

There is nothing more painful than seeing hate reflecting in the one you loves eyes. Yet you manage to portray hope for tomorrow. Nice work.

J.R.V.A. 07-24-2003 06:35 AM

Yes, I know how you feel. Been there before.
Thanks

numberfive 07-24-2003 07:20 PM

Ah, thanks for the responses.

:)

maximus 07-24-2003 07:28 PM

wow, that is about how i feel right now. why cant love just work out like it should?

tv. 07-24-2003 09:21 PM

that is nice

numberfive 07-25-2003 12:56 AM

I think I'm over her, but theres this new girl. Well, I'm not good at explaining these things, just read on:

I think I'm in love with this girl
The way she smiles and how just one word
One single word, effortlessly tossed into the air
Is enough to make the day, night, afternoon..
Brighter, better, fantastic

Her beauty, I tell you
It almost inexplicable
Her hips swaying, gently left, gently right
Enticing, but almost too graceful to touch
Left, right, left, right

Her smile, her laugh, the way she blushes
They're signs, like everything's going to be ok
It's more than just hope now, it's like a fact
And I'm believing

Man, I think I'm in love with this girl.

Eowyn_Vala 07-25-2003 10:38 PM

*sigh* I'm speechless! That was beautiful.


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