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Atropos4 · 04-22-2003, 11:35 AM

Vineyard of a Lost Soul

A lonely feeling infecting your mind
All of your shadows become intertwined
Running toward your crying soul
You desperately try to take control
Grasping for what is lost in waste
Leads to everything blackness laced
Cadaverous feelings make you numb
Tripping over the stem it's from
Going nowhere makes emptyness real
With all you have you fight to feel
Setting fire to your hollow thoughts
Laughing darkly at what was caught
Chasing the darkness in your head
Stimulating what you thought was dead
All of the sickness and the wrong
Have made your mind and heart grow strong
Light reflecting off your tears
Seems to fade away past fears
A little weed transformed to vine
Protects your soul, your heart, and mind

Angel · 04-22-2003, 05:11 PM

Atropos4...I really like this a lot. Your last two lines seem to speak to me.

Memalvada · 04-22-2003, 06:48 PM

I really identified with your poem. I loved it.

Atropos4 · 04-26-2003, 11:30 AM

thank -you This poem is actually my favorite one

*Nikki* · 04-27-2003, 07:05 AM

Excellent. Your writing style reminds me of my own. I loved it

04-22-2003, 11:35 AM	#1 (permalink)
Atropos4 Think about it Location: North Carolina	Vineyard of a Lost Soul Vineyard of a Lost Soul A lonely feeling infecting your mind All of your shadows become intertwined Running toward your crying soul You desperately try to take control Grasping for what is lost in waste Leads to everything blackness laced Cadaverous feelings make you numb Tripping over the stem it's from Going nowhere makes emptyness real With all you have you fight to feel Setting fire to your hollow thoughts Laughing darkly at what was caught Chasing the darkness in your head Stimulating what you thought was dead All of the sickness and the wrong Have made your mind and heart grow strong Light reflecting off your tears Seems to fade away past fears A little weed transformed to vine Protects your soul, your heart, and mind __________________ Minds are like parachutes. They work better open. "If I were Hermione, I would have licked his pantleg."

04-22-2003, 05:11 PM	#2 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Atropos4...I really like this a lot. Your last two lines seem to speak to me. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

04-22-2003, 06:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	I really identified with your poem. I loved it. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

04-26-2003, 11:30 AM	#4 (permalink)
Atropos4 Think about it Location: North Carolina	thank -you This poem is actually my favorite one __________________ Minds are like parachutes. They work better open. "If I were Hermione, I would have licked his pantleg."

04-27-2003, 07:05 AM	#5 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	Excellent. Your writing style reminds me of my own. I loved it