guypunkr

Please be gentle... Most of these talk about really painful events in my life (even if you don't get what's going on).

If you want to hear any of these to music (because most are complete songs), all you have to do is ask...

guypunkr

(Verse One)

I don't believe you,
You just left me here,
To fend for myself again,
What does he do that I never could?
I'm crying inside,
No matter what you say,
I feel forsaken,
Stop trying to hurt me so much!

(Chorus)

What were you doing?
Why is he here now?
What happened to me?
These tears I shed burn you too!
I'll ruin your life,
You're caught in my web,
Every tear's for you,
Eating at your soul!

(Verse Two)

You wanna hurt me more?
You wanna see me bleed?
I got a knife right?
Every slice is cut for you!
You need to leave me be,
I'm tired of this game,
I'm all yours like I said,
Just tell me what you want me for!

(Verse Three)

I don't have free will,
I don't have a choice,
Just leave me alone,
If you won't help me when I need you!
My life is in your hands,
Would you let me go?
Will you smash my heart,
Just like you've always done before?

That's all. The order is Intro-Verse One-Chorus-Verse Two-Chorus-Solo-Verse Three-Chorus-End.

guypunkr

This one's long, but I like it

(Chorus)

Look at the playground in our lives,
The swing movin' back and forth,
Merry-go-round goes round and round,
Hard to climb the slide and the ride is so quick.
But the swing seems to be stuck low,
And the merry-go-round doesn't seem to slow,
The slide's ladder feels a mile long,
All the rides broken down again!

(Verse One)

See a little ridin' on the swing?
She's just the world's little play thing,
Holdin' the chains tight and swingin' her legs,
Smile on her face and a light in her eyes.
Every time she goes higher and higher she flies,
But she goes back no matter how hard she tries,
So what's the point of even tryin' at all?
She crawls off with a frown and tears.

(Verse Two)

Wiping her face she gets on the merry-go-round,
Watches the world spin and giggles out loud,
Hangin' on tight at things pass by,
She feels weightless and starts to fly.
She wants to get off 'cause it's all too much,
Goes faster and faster as she starts to scream.
Was this rush really worth all the pain?
A ride that started so fun throws her off again.

(Verse Three)

Brushing herself off, she tries one last ride,
But this one has such a huge climb.
She gets to the top and the drop is so quick.
Fun for half a second, was it really worth it?
Tryin' again 'cause it was all so fast,
She wants the fun to last and last.
Doesn't the work seem to be too much?
To reach real joy seems to be a dream!

(Verse Four, change of style)

She's so tired, tired of those games she used to play,
Goin' back and forth, or round and round, or no where at all,
But when, I ask you, when will she grow up?
When will all the rides be over?

Order goes Intro-Chorus-Verse One-Chorus-Verse Two-Bridge-Chorus-Verse Three-Solo-End.

I'll post more if I get some feedback on these. Thanks for all comments coming (they're all welcome).

J.R.V.A.

Yes, I like them. I would like to hear them, Its so cool to read lyrics, get them in your head and hear the song AFTER you have done that.

__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

guypunkr

Thanks J.R.V.A., that really means a lot (considering how great and friendly this community is )

Tears of Acid is recorded (badly) at http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/rock3...rs_of_Acid.wma

I still think I did pretty well considering the circumstances I had to work in :-p

Hope it doesn't kill the image you had for the lyrics. Thanks again.

guypunkr

This one is called "Show Me That Smile," and I wrote it for that special someone a long long time ago. It's quite a bit slower and it's a love song, so try not to compare it to the others so far, hehe.

I hate it when you cry, and I hate it when you lie,
So please don't do it again,
I want to stay together, and be with you forever,
But I'll always want to be your friend...

(Here's the chorus)
Wipe those tears away, I am here with you today,
I won't just be around for a while,
I need you by my side, when there's no where to run, and no place to hide,
So I want you show me that smile...

I'd wait for you forever, in this life or the next,
You're always on my mind,
Why would I want the others, when you were always best?
A better girl, in a thousand years, I couldn't ever find...

(chorus again)

But you'll be leaving soon, my heart goes in your hand,
I might stay or I might go,
No matter what I am, I will be waiting for you dear,
I love you so much honey, that all I'll ever know...

(chorus again)

When you see me let me know, how you feel, if I should go,
I always take your words to heart,
If you don't want me around, I'd leave without a sound,
But then my life would fall apart...

(chorus x2)

Show me that smile honey, I love the way you grin,
I love everything about you,
Give me a hug, and a kiss goodbye, but don't let me see a tear,
I love you honey, and that's all I feel is true...

guypunkr

This one's called "Run and Hide." It's not really for anyone or anything, though halfway through writing the song, I realized I kept talking about my dad... Don't know if I was venting or what... But oh well, this song is made to be angry.

I'm sitting alone, in my own room,
Belong's to no one else but me,
So why can't you, just leave me alone?
Why won't you let me be free?

(Chorus)
I just want to run and hide,
From the problems of the Earth,
You're suposed to guide and help,
But you seem to make them worse...

I don't want to see you no more,
I'm telling you right now,
I don't want to be bothered by the likes of you,
I only want to get away, but I just don't know how...

(chorus)

Hiding in the closets, or underneath the sheets,
I don't know how to flee,
I gotta get outta here, away from you,
Why won't you set me free?

(chorus)

I don't bother anyone, but you're always on my back,
Over some little shit I didn't do,
I'm tryin' to explain, through the hate in my voice,
You just can't hear the truth...

(chorus)

I just don't understand you, but at least you don't get me,
I'll fight you for a thousand years,
You're always cold and say you don't care,
Is that why you shed those tears?

J.R.V.A.

Not bad . Were you playing anything, or singing only?
I would like to hear it live, I bet it sounds a lot better.
Maybe if I ever make it to Hawaii

__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

guypunkr

Thanks, I was only singing (and the volume was turned way low). But if you want to hear it live, you'll have to hear it with an entirely different crew. I'm moving to Virginia soon, hehe.

guypunkr

The one's called Angel's Tears, I made if for a girl named Emily Tweedie who has completely changed my life and single handedly led me to Christ, but at the time I wrote this, we hadn't been talking because she got a b/f, but I promised to write her a song for her birthday (Christmas eve), it made her cry and come back to me. Up until recently, we had been the best of friends (and a bit more, eventually causing the end of our relationship and my banning from the church, her father was the pastor there).

When I see you there, with your long, blonde hair,
I see nothing but an angel sitting near,
And I tear myself apart, from the thought, that it was my fault,
And that I made you shed those tears...

Well I'm here right now, looking in your blue eyes,
But I don't know how long I can stay,
I'd apologize, a thousand times, if only you'd ask me to,
But you'd rather that I'd never say...

(Chorus)
How I really feel, how I really want you,
I'm sorry for before,
I was just a little kid, and I didn't know what I wanted,
Please don't shed those Angel's Tears...

There's nothing left for me without you, I'm giving it all up,
I'm tired of "The Game,"
Without an angel like you, so wonderful and cool,
It'll never be the same...

Maybe you don't cry no more, and you don't care at all,
But you're still the world and more to me,
You completely ignore me, you're with someone new,
But I wish that I could make you see...

(Chorus again)

I never ever used you, even though that's what you thought,
I don't know what to say now, how can I get you back?
I just want you again, but you only want the end,
I just wish you'd listen to me say...

guypunkr

Sorry

I've been feeling very vulnerable lately, so I don't think I'll be posting up here anymore...

I was looking for a way to delete the thread, but I guess that solely up to the moderators...