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Old 07-05-2003, 10:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
Kyp
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Location: Oregon
Make me believe you

Make me believe you when you say
That everything will be okay
Awake I lay in my bed
Unable to stop my unwell head
Afraid of what will come to be
Worried about what will happen to me
In my mold of love and hate
I guess there's no such thing as fate
My journey in this world is just begining
And all I've had is loss not winning

Make me believe you with all my heart
That the hardest part is the start
Someday I just might crack
This is more than I can hack
Behind the wall I made myself
Is where I have hidden myself
How to crash through the wall I don't know
Alone in my life I must continue to go
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Old 07-07-2003, 06:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: bathurst
I like it a lot.

Captures the imagery well. Easy to identify with.
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Old 07-07-2003, 08:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: There's no place like home..
wow, i can relate only too well. My question now is that once you have broken though the wall, how do you stop yourself from constructing another? Just a thought, or well question.

Great piece of work!
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Old 07-08-2003, 06:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Yes, I know the walls well...
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