I Don't Miss You. - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

crow_daw · 07-05-2003, 03:17 PM

I don't miss you.
I don't miss having you in my world.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss not being able to speak to other girls.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss never knowing what you're up to.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss telling you I love you.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss you not saying what was on your mind.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss feeling beneath you all the time.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss being treated like a child.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss making you smile.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss feeling safe from harm.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss you being in my arms.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss actually NOT feeling completely black.
I don't miss you.
Please come back.

mirevolver · 07-05-2003, 05:07 PM

Yeah, been there before.

Minx · 07-07-2003, 01:00 PM

I like the ending and the contradiction throughout.
Nice work!

GoldenOuroboros · 07-07-2003, 02:32 PM

That's like the poem in the movie '10 things I hate about you'

crow_daw · 07-07-2003, 04:22 PM

Never seen it, but I've seen The Taming of the Shrew in the theatre, although I'm sure they're nothing alike.

*Nikki* · 07-07-2003, 04:38 PM

Different. Nice rhythm going there.

Eowyn_Vala · 07-07-2003, 08:41 PM

I like it! A lot! Been there too! I didn't like it much! But I do like how you expressed it!

J.R.V.A. · 07-08-2003, 06:09 AM

Thank you. I like this a lot

guypunkr · 07-08-2003, 09:31 PM

I've said it before, I'll say it again: Love is a joke with no punch line.

That was very good Crow. I hope we all get to see more of your work soon.

starlite · 07-08-2003, 09:36 PM

I just went through that a few days ago. . . Wouldnt it be nice to just know who you should be with

best wishes

troit · 07-09-2003, 06:45 AM

Been there... there now... moved on...

sarcasmo · 07-16-2003, 12:52 PM

haha, that was great. Soooo been there. And back. And there. And back. Hmmmmm.

MaGlC_MaN · 02-13-2004, 04:38 PM

I don't miss not having read this poem,
I'm just kidding, I love it just as much as ocean foam!

07-05-2003, 03:17 PM	#1 (permalink)
crow_daw Idolator Location: Vol Country	I Don't Miss You. I don't miss you. I don't miss having you in my world. I don't miss you. I don't miss not being able to speak to other girls. I don't miss you. I don't miss never knowing what you're up to. I don't miss you. I don't miss telling you I love you. I don't miss you. I don't miss you not saying what was on your mind. I don't miss you. I don't miss feeling beneath you all the time. I don't miss you. I don't miss being treated like a child. I don't miss you. I don't miss making you smile. I don't miss you. I don't miss feeling safe from harm. I don't miss you. I don't miss you being in my arms. I don't miss you. I don't miss actually NOT feeling completely black. I don't miss you. Please come back. __________________ "We each have a star, all we have to do is find it. Once you do, everyone who sees it will be blinded." - Earl Simmons

07-05-2003, 05:07 PM	#2 (permalink)
mirevolver Inspired by the mind's eye. Location: Between the darkness and the light.	Yeah, been there before. __________________ Aside from my great plans to become the future dictator of the moon, I have little interest in political discussions.

07-07-2003, 01:00 PM	#3 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	I like the ending and the contradiction throughout. Nice work! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

07-07-2003, 02:32 PM	#4 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	That's like the poem in the movie '10 things I hate about you' __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

07-07-2003, 04:22 PM	#5 (permalink)
crow_daw Idolator Location: Vol Country	Never seen it, but I've seen The Taming of the Shrew in the theatre, although I'm sure they're nothing alike. __________________ "We each have a star, all we have to do is find it. Once you do, everyone who sees it will be blinded." - Earl Simmons

07-07-2003, 04:38 PM	#6 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	Different. Nice rhythm going there.

07-07-2003, 08:41 PM	#7 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	I like it! A lot! Been there too! I didn't like it much! But I do like how you expressed it! __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

07-08-2003, 06:09 AM	#8 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Thank you. I like this a lot __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

07-08-2003, 09:31 PM	#9 (permalink)
guypunkr Loser Location: Newport News, VA	I've said it before, I'll say it again: Love is a joke with no punch line. That was very good Crow. I hope we all get to see more of your work soon.

07-08-2003, 09:36 PM	#10 (permalink)
starlite Upright Location: Kansas	I just went through that a few days ago. . . Wouldnt it be nice to just know who you should be with best wishes __________________ I try to write my feelings so I will right now. . . I only post to get feed back. I think its a little rude when you read and dont even bother to make a little comment. Please do because this helps me a great deal. Thank you ~Sarah~

07-09-2003, 06:45 AM	#11 (permalink)
troit Transfer Agent Location: NYC	Been there... there now... moved on... __________________ I've yet to dephile myself...

07-16-2003, 12:52 PM	#12 (permalink)
sarcasmo Upright Location: Canada	haha, that was great. Soooo been there. And back. And there. And back. Hmmmmm.

02-13-2004, 04:38 PM	#13 (permalink)
MaGlC_MaN Insane Location: Tennessee	I don't miss not having read this poem, I'm just kidding, I love it just as much as ocean foam! __________________ Bye.